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Ref:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/11642282/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/18542233/
Commission info!
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DeviantART
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Also check out my webcomic: Tales of Elysium!
Category All / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1280 x 852px
File Size 178.7 kB
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I love what you do haychel.
One small point of criticism though: If the raichu is supposed to be smacking the ball out of the trainer's paw, either the speed lines should be opposite or the tail should have hit and swept through/past the ball. As it us now it looks like the ball has been hit away before the tail touched it, which doesn't make sense physically. Minor detail, not super big deal.
Thanks for making more cool stuff!
One small point of criticism though: If the raichu is supposed to be smacking the ball out of the trainer's paw, either the speed lines should be opposite or the tail should have hit and swept through/past the ball. As it us now it looks like the ball has been hit away before the tail touched it, which doesn't make sense physically. Minor detail, not super big deal.
Thanks for making more cool stuff!
Looking at this again, I might have to rescind my previous claim... It just looks natural. I'm not sure why, but it's almost as though you're seeing the picture through time, where the tail moves to strike the ball which then moves afterward, giving the image a very active effect. I dunno if that's what you were going for but I can't imagine that it's necessarily the wrong way to go about doing it.
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