Somehow... funny. A nice take to the prompt, but I just was able to see what would happen. Transformation... again. No no, I'm cool with it, I have read these prompt responses of yours earlier, I know it's a theme you use really often. In this story, what felt good, is the dialog. The two men talking, their dialog felt rather down-to-earth, they are just two normal fellows. It is rather hilarious when they wander to speak about the more fantastic elements in this setting of yours, using rather normal modern dialect, speaking about magi and werewolves. I sense a hint of comedy.

Anyway, nice little piece, I laughed, I was intrigued, I enjoyed reading this. Good work.

Thanks for reading

This setting would be pretty interesting to develop further.

I was thinking the same thing after I had finished it... I might just come back to this.

very nicely done Xeans.... read it with my morning coffee... delicious on both counts... well put together too.

*hugs...

V.

*Hugs back* ^..^

Do you use a spell checker? Don't! (I say this a lot.) You've got a few situations where you've got the wrong word instead of the one you wanted. 'Herd' for 'Heard', 'Eek' for 'Eke'. Couple of places where you needed an apostrophe for the possessive - Tom's, not Toms - and drop it for the plural - Not Gryphon's, Gryphons.

Setting's quite curious, the interjection of fantasy elements on a contemporary society in the particular way you've done it is a nifty concept. Work a little on your prose, it could use brushing up, and I would've liked to see more emotional turmoil and attachment - things came across as rather flat, wheras there's a lot of potential for conflicting feelings as these secrets come up and all.

Duely noted ^..^
This was a fast peice so I didn't put to much energy into it, but I'll work on all of this next time around. I'll take care with my spell checking.
Thanks for all that

I really liked the way you described Tom changing. The "ligaments growing and reshaping", and "a series of crunches echoed through him". Very good, and it made me twinge a bit. The only thing I thought was kind of distracting, was the characters using "dude" and "man" so much. But that's just me. Otherwise, good job.

^..^ Thanks for reading

wow. really capturing. really good descriptions too. very much enjoyed reading it.

Yay ^..^

^..^ Glad you liked it!

This was real good! i like the dialog. sounded liek they were part of some sort of church in a world with magic and stuff. man i wish i had a spell to be a were-fox ya know?