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Akari in a Bikini
A New Years Eve doodle, finished last night due to the nagging of 
Shura
Shura
Category Artwork (Digital) / Fantasy
Species Vulpine (Other)
Size 652 x 1000px
File Size 482.3 kB
The hair is really nice! I love the blue.
You've got some anatomy problems here, though. For one thing, the whole pose feels stiff and rigid- try adding some juxtasition of the hips and shoulders, to balance the weight of the figure out and give it a more realistic volume. (For example- the left shoulder a bit higher then the right, and the right hip higher then the left.) also,try drawing gestures of people in motion- you can see how they move and stand, and it will help lend credibility to your drawings.
The relationship of the right arm with the back is just a little off- when you're behind someone, the edge of their back and their shoulder blade is in front of their arm.
You've got a really strong sense of lighting and shading. Good work!
You've got some anatomy problems here, though. For one thing, the whole pose feels stiff and rigid- try adding some juxtasition of the hips and shoulders, to balance the weight of the figure out and give it a more realistic volume. (For example- the left shoulder a bit higher then the right, and the right hip higher then the left.) also,try drawing gestures of people in motion- you can see how they move and stand, and it will help lend credibility to your drawings.
The relationship of the right arm with the back is just a little off- when you're behind someone, the edge of their back and their shoulder blade is in front of their arm.
You've got a really strong sense of lighting and shading. Good work!
Yay! Critique~! .... I've been getting a lot today.... Yay~
OK, thanks, I will work on that~
I originally wasn't gonna post it because it didn't seem right, though my gf forced me anyways, thanks for showing me what I did inaccurately.
Thanks~
The coloring is the only thing I did well in this.... <<;
OK, thanks, I will work on that~
I originally wasn't gonna post it because it didn't seem right, though my gf forced me anyways, thanks for showing me what I did inaccurately.
Thanks~
The coloring is the only thing I did well in this.... <<;
No, the coloring is not the only thing you did right, your sense of lighting is really strong, and a few minor errors can throw off a whole peice. It's not a terrible picture at all. You should really keep going, you've got something here.
A couple of good things- Borders usually has anatomy books on sale. Anatomy for the Artist runs about 20$, but they have skeletal and musle system charts that fold out for like, 5$. If you're in college or live near one, the campus bookstore may carry used anatomy, medical, veterinary, or other helpful textbooks. Or amazon.com.
Are you on conceptart.net? That's a great place to go if you're looking to improve, a lot of users there are professionals in the field and really have lots of good advice.
Good luck!
A couple of good things- Borders usually has anatomy books on sale. Anatomy for the Artist runs about 20$, but they have skeletal and musle system charts that fold out for like, 5$. If you're in college or live near one, the campus bookstore may carry used anatomy, medical, veterinary, or other helpful textbooks. Or amazon.com.
Are you on conceptart.net? That's a great place to go if you're looking to improve, a lot of users there are professionals in the field and really have lots of good advice.
Good luck!
Living in college, and I'm gonna buy one at the end of the semester, human anatomy & animal anatomy after I get cash for my pile of general chemistry books (honestly why do they have to get us to get 5 repetitious books for one 6 month class?), and I should look up that book...
Thanks for all the info~
Thanks for all the info~
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