Category Artwork (Traditional) / Comics
Species Mammal (Other)
Size 815 x 1280px
File Size 913.7 kB
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I think he's refering to to S4-S7.
While Simon refered to him as Mr. Suzuhara, if you check to key words "Saito" is right there. And if you think about it, S 4 = S aito while S 7 = S uzuhara... it makes a lot of sense.
I can only assume his previously human name was too long for the Immortal usernames or something.
While Simon refered to him as Mr. Suzuhara, if you check to key words "Saito" is right there. And if you think about it, S 4 = S aito while S 7 = S uzuhara... it makes a lot of sense.
I can only assume his previously human name was too long for the Immortal usernames or something.
Dang. I thought the comic was going to be done in the next strip as Leon breaks up with Simon, rejects Meier's invitation, and goes back to college like nothing ever happened. That would be the compelling story we all want...............I have liquid sarcasm coming out of 7 orifices right now.
Hmm... not much to say to this page, story wise. Though I feel mascot is just a cover story.
To address the artistic concerns in the description, she looks just fine on this page and in the fourth panel of the previous page. In the second panel of the previous page... her chest feels a little too big. I mean, I can tell it's intended to be perspective, but she's smaller than a normal adult so when I look at it my mind either stretcher her mid torso out like taffy or give her hulking shoulders like she has the perfect V profile at age ten... and as a girl no less.
But yeah... that's kind of running into the verbose problem with artistic critic. You can find a million words to describe how something's wrong, but describing how it's good just sums up to "it's good" since overall being "good" mostly deals with it not being subconsciously rejected by your brain. Overall, Sei is looking fine.
To address the artistic concerns in the description, she looks just fine on this page and in the fourth panel of the previous page. In the second panel of the previous page... her chest feels a little too big. I mean, I can tell it's intended to be perspective, but she's smaller than a normal adult so when I look at it my mind either stretcher her mid torso out like taffy or give her hulking shoulders like she has the perfect V profile at age ten... and as a girl no less.
But yeah... that's kind of running into the verbose problem with artistic critic. You can find a million words to describe how something's wrong, but describing how it's good just sums up to "it's good" since overall being "good" mostly deals with it not being subconsciously rejected by your brain. Overall, Sei is looking fine.
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Leon, could you out yourself as a massive dork a little bit more, please? I think the Vul way out in the Andromeda Galaxy didn't quite catch it.
Heh, Sei's face in the second panel. "Listen here, skippy!"
Although, "You can try to scrub it out if you want"...unintentional innuendo.
Mascot my left ass cheek. She shares a last name with robo-dude, presumably. Also she's somehow blue even though that's not supposed to be possible. Maybe she's the experiment?
EDIT: Also, I think she looks fine. I'm not sure I can comment extensively because I'm so used to seeing adult!Sei that seeing her as a 10-year-old is a little weird, but I see nothing wrong with her.
Also, holy shit, I'm all caught up now! Feel good man.
Leon, could you out yourself as a massive dork a little bit more, please? I think the Vul way out in the Andromeda Galaxy didn't quite catch it.
Heh, Sei's face in the second panel. "Listen here, skippy!"
Although, "You can try to scrub it out if you want"...unintentional innuendo.
Mascot my left ass cheek. She shares a last name with robo-dude, presumably. Also she's somehow blue even though that's not supposed to be possible. Maybe she's the experiment?
EDIT: Also, I think she looks fine. I'm not sure I can comment extensively because I'm so used to seeing adult!Sei that seeing her as a 10-year-old is a little weird, but I see nothing wrong with her.
Also, holy shit, I'm all caught up now! Feel good man.
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