mmh, very promising. dynamic viewpoints and a youngster grinning like a maniac. and whistling the melody to a naughty song, I guess. :)

some sentences are twisted. I hope you get some more help from others with it... I'm not a native speaker myself. :)

the first bubble should have an exclamation mark.
2: replace reign with realm.
3: "A paradisical, wonderful land, where every single word has meaning, where reality is constantly redefined through a sole impulse of a will."
4: "Such is the nature of it's half-existence that only a few are meant to even know about it, and even fewer are those fortunate enough to reach through the gates of BellHalá!"

I think this would work. but my graps of that language is soemwhat limited... ^^'