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Gurtog, an orc lost to the strange army of mindless drones known only as the Enforcers some years ago, left his older brother, Ritch, feeling just as lost without him. That was until he met Gary, a human from the same realm as the orc, known only as the Outerworld. An entirely different plane, many who came to Arklorn city from there, were scorned and loathed, viewed as little more than invaders and vermin. The police squadron however, always desperate for new recruits, saw fit to hire bother orc and human on the spot when no other place would. Little did either Gary Or Ritch known that they, like many before them, would be subjected to something called ‘the Process’, the very thing that enslaved the minds of those who ended up a part of the Enforcer troop. Though the way they would be enslaved would be much different from those that were processed before them…
All the while, with very few people suspecting it, the panther who controlled it all, known as Steward, gained more and more control over the oblivious city.
Category Story / Fantasy
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Thanks again for writing a story. Definitely fun to see write about my ideas! Overall I really enjoyed it however there are two minor things I wanna ask about. Firstly, I don't think it was mentioned that Gary and Ritch were wearing helmets prior to entering the car and the fact that the helmets are part of the police departments uniform?
Also, I noticed that the mechanical arm grabbing Gary's helmet in the pic wasn't seen anywhere in the story?
Definitely a good read though!
Also, I noticed that the mechanical arm grabbing Gary's helmet in the pic wasn't seen anywhere in the story?
Definitely a good read though!
Hey Raizy, I'm sorry this took me so long to submit, bear with me still as I'm gearing up for x-mas.
Firstly, I actually hadn't realized/forgot the helmets were an addition to the suits, that they were added once the car sprung to 'life'. I'll have to go back and fix that at some point. It's a small error on my part and thank you for noticing.
Secondly, the time frame the picture depicted comes after the robotic arms had actually retracted into the car door, so they wouldn't have been showing.
Firstly, I actually hadn't realized/forgot the helmets were an addition to the suits, that they were added once the car sprung to 'life'. I'll have to go back and fix that at some point. It's a small error on my part and thank you for noticing.
Secondly, the time frame the picture depicted comes after the robotic arms had actually retracted into the car door, so they wouldn't have been showing.
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