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So this is a commission that took a while and I have absolutely no idea why. Probably just a lack of free time lately...or maybe Fallout 4...no, definitely the free time thing.
Anyway, here we have Gold, a micro dragon who has all manner of adventures. Though his most daring and dangerous adventure sees him sneaking into the home of some regular sized folk, to steal cookies. What follows is a tale to end all tales, that is provided he can make it back out of the house to tell it!
As usual, enjoy!
Gold is
Drgn Gold
Ruko
SlimyTongues
Cyan is
FiberopticFeline
Story is mine
Anyway, here we have Gold, a micro dragon who has all manner of adventures. Though his most daring and dangerous adventure sees him sneaking into the home of some regular sized folk, to steal cookies. What follows is a tale to end all tales, that is provided he can make it back out of the house to tell it!
As usual, enjoy!
Gold is
Drgn GoldRuko
SlimyTonguesCyan is
FiberopticFelineStory is mine
Category Story / Macro / Micro
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 32.5 kB
Listed in Folders
I've never had a story written for me with my character in it before, so this was certainly an interesting experience for me to be reading, hah. Couple of lines I really like being, 'And it was hard to get more quirky than a robot and a mutated bird monster being in a relationship together.' and 'Ruko’s beak pulled away from Cyan’s mouth like an insect proboscis', haha, pretty great.
There's certainly a few things that are pretty un-canon for Ruko, but course I know the uvula was specially requested, hah, but one thing that really stood out was the fact you mentioned Ruko has no teeth. Ruko always has teeth, it's part of him, practicaly his main feature. He's also filthy, always. He has practically no hygiene at all and usualy has feathers stuck together with grime. But other than those two points it was pretty enjoyable to read someone else's take on him.
I really liked the amount of time and detail you spent describing Cyan's mouth and how she's made up too, I've always liked the idea of that amount of synthetic detail, and you definitely captured it well.
All in all a pretty interesting story to experience, certainly something new for me to see created by another involving my character, pretty fun. <:
There's certainly a few things that are pretty un-canon for Ruko, but course I know the uvula was specially requested, hah, but one thing that really stood out was the fact you mentioned Ruko has no teeth. Ruko always has teeth, it's part of him, practicaly his main feature. He's also filthy, always. He has practically no hygiene at all and usualy has feathers stuck together with grime. But other than those two points it was pretty enjoyable to read someone else's take on him.
I really liked the amount of time and detail you spent describing Cyan's mouth and how she's made up too, I've always liked the idea of that amount of synthetic detail, and you definitely captured it well.
All in all a pretty interesting story to experience, certainly something new for me to see created by another involving my character, pretty fun. <:
I do apologise on the part of the teeth, I even had the ref sheet with me when I was working on it and /still/ managed to forget about them. Not entirely sure about what you're getting at about the filth. I assume it was my comments about the cleanliness, which would make sense, I guess. Still, I was kind of using that as an example of a SFW thing that you could do where one character kind of dons the other. But, I apologise again if it's considered non-canon.
Still, glad you enjoyed it, despite the errors on my part.
Still, glad you enjoyed it, despite the errors on my part.
This was such a pleasure to read, I found the descriptions to be very creative and a lot of lines to be pretty golden, like the lines SlimyTongues has quoted above. c': The very in-depth description of the happenings inside each of the maws and Gold's very cute actions and demeanor were very lovely. I can tell I'm going to be reading this over quite a few times, pretty dang awesome work. <3
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