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hes powdered padded and ready to go....
well hopefully he wont go to soon
well hopefully he wont go to soon
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Dragon (Other)
Size 800 x 800px
File Size 224 kB
I gotta say dude, I love your art, but lately your art (especially when you try to draw characters you haven't drawn before) looks extremely weird. You keep adding in these contorted little shadows and muscle lines until your characters look like squeezed-out tubes of toothpaste.
I mean, compare these:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17420114/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17144888/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17760622/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17588318/
to these:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/18000838/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17648748/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17978899/
Hopefully you can see what I'm talking about. And believe me dude, I know how it is. I almost never, ever draw, but when I do, I usually get *obsessed* with details. I can't be satisfied with the drawing because a dark line from the shading sticks out too much. I end up spending half an hour softening the gradient on a single toe and, inevitably, producing chalkboard-flat rectangles because my characters have no definition whatsoever. I'm slowly breaking the habit, but you seem to be starting to get obsessed with detail too-- just in the opposite sense: you're trying to add definition to everything. Even things that aren't really there. I mean, what even *is* that line under Jake's breast? Another breast? His ribs? And if that's a rib, what is the other line down and to the left?
Too many lines results in toothpaste, man. Sincerely, someone who really likes your art.
I mean, compare these:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17420114/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17144888/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17760622/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17588318/
to these:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/18000838/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17648748/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/17978899/
Hopefully you can see what I'm talking about. And believe me dude, I know how it is. I almost never, ever draw, but when I do, I usually get *obsessed* with details. I can't be satisfied with the drawing because a dark line from the shading sticks out too much. I end up spending half an hour softening the gradient on a single toe and, inevitably, producing chalkboard-flat rectangles because my characters have no definition whatsoever. I'm slowly breaking the habit, but you seem to be starting to get obsessed with detail too-- just in the opposite sense: you're trying to add definition to everything. Even things that aren't really there. I mean, what even *is* that line under Jake's breast? Another breast? His ribs? And if that's a rib, what is the other line down and to the left?
Too many lines results in toothpaste, man. Sincerely, someone who really likes your art.
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