Ive been irritated with this for a few weeks but I really want to finish it.
So here's my plea for critique or redlines to better get it looking.. good.
The front right foot is suppose to be bones but.. as you see I can't figure out how to make it look correct at that angle.
Any help with that part in particular would be great. Anything else you see that I could possibly do to make this look better would also be awesome.
Reference for the pose used.. Some lion photo I found on google but havn't re-found since.
So here's my plea for critique or redlines to better get it looking.. good.
The front right foot is suppose to be bones but.. as you see I can't figure out how to make it look correct at that angle.
Any help with that part in particular would be great. Anything else you see that I could possibly do to make this look better would also be awesome.
Reference for the pose used.. Some lion photo I found on google but havn't re-found since.
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Animal related (non-anthro)
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 800 x 626px
File Size 483.2 kB
Looking really good, the pose is great and dynamic. Only thing is, I think the back right paw needs to be flat on the ground because the rest look like they are. But the two whole paws look great, and that face looks awesome. X3
For the skeletal paw, which is really hard 'cause of how complicated hands and feet are, I recommend using actual skeleton paw references, like this.
http://maxshouse.com/anatomy/claws/.....on_%20crop.jpg
Not sure if that's the kind of paw you're going for though. :3 This is gonna look awesome when you're done. X3
For the skeletal paw, which is really hard 'cause of how complicated hands and feet are, I recommend using actual skeleton paw references, like this.
http://maxshouse.com/anatomy/claws/.....on_%20crop.jpg
Not sure if that's the kind of paw you're going for though. :3 This is gonna look awesome when you're done. X3
Thanks, the back leg is suppose to be mid stride but it looks off to me too like that so I may have to go back and change it.
Thanks for the link to the reference, bones are hard. D: I've looked at a few references with little luck in figuring out how to make it look like he's standing on it.. You know with the lack of animals walking around with their bones showing.
I may just have to change it so he's taking a step with that foot if I can't get it to look.. right. We'll see though, I might end up figuring it out after all.
Thank you for the help, I really appreciate it!
<3
Thanks for the link to the reference, bones are hard. D: I've looked at a few references with little luck in figuring out how to make it look like he's standing on it.. You know with the lack of animals walking around with their bones showing.
I may just have to change it so he's taking a step with that foot if I can't get it to look.. right. We'll see though, I might end up figuring it out after all.
Thank you for the help, I really appreciate it!
<3
Oooh, okay, I see it. :3
Sure, sorry, you're right about the fact that there's no skeletal animals walking around. XD Makes it more difficult.. ah, just tried something. X3 Looking up "mounted animal skeleton" in google got a few on stands which look more realistic.
You're really putting a lot of work into this, it's gonna be awesome. X3
Sure, sorry if I went overboard! :D Great stuffs you got!
Sure, sorry, you're right about the fact that there's no skeletal animals walking around. XD Makes it more difficult.. ah, just tried something. X3 Looking up "mounted animal skeleton" in google got a few on stands which look more realistic.
You're really putting a lot of work into this, it's gonna be awesome. X3
Sure, sorry if I went overboard! :D Great stuffs you got!
Oh, I didn't even think about searching for skeleton mounts to see if I can find a front view. You're brainmeats are awesome.
mmmm google.
Nah, you didn't go overboard, I adore the ideas on how to improve things and very rarely get much on FA so I was excited to get some help so quick. :D
mmmm google.
Nah, you didn't go overboard, I adore the ideas on how to improve things and very rarely get much on FA so I was excited to get some help so quick. :D
Great symmetry, esp with the face/head! The nose looks a bit off though, like the left nostril is a bit higher than the right. I guess it doesn't matter where the 'beard' is, but it might look better shifted a little down and to the right, to match the tilt of the head.
The right arm looks off, like the elbow is a slightly too high and protrudes forward instead of back... dunno exactly how to explain what looks off about it or how to fix the right arm.?
The toes on the left rear leg look a lot bigger than the toes on the right. And the right heel seems to be sticking out a bit too much <?>.
The right arm looks off, like the elbow is a slightly too high and protrudes forward instead of back... dunno exactly how to explain what looks off about it or how to fix the right arm.?
The toes on the left rear leg look a lot bigger than the toes on the right. And the right heel seems to be sticking out a bit too much <?>.
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