Only the bare essentials for what YOU TOO need to be an adventurer in Deleasean!
And yeahhh it's full of spelling errors :p so sue me.
And yeahhh it's full of spelling errors :p so sue me.
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I can't help but proofread a text-heavy thing like this:
11: I think "twin" was supposed to be "twine".
13: Knife and whetstone are misspelled.
16: Alchest is misspelled.
Not trying to be critical, just helpful. I love this look at all her gear! You do detailed stuff like this so well, whether it's equipment or intricate body jewelry. :)
11: I think "twin" was supposed to be "twine".
13: Knife and whetstone are misspelled.
16: Alchest is misspelled.
Not trying to be critical, just helpful. I love this look at all her gear! You do detailed stuff like this so well, whether it's equipment or intricate body jewelry. :)
I assumed that, but in 16 it's spelled "aclhest." I thought that might be correct, but figured it was more likely "alchest" because of reading 6 beforehand.
Anyway, like I said, trying to be helpful not critical. Probably wouldn't have said anything if I'd seen your comment about the spelling errors below the picture, but by that point I was absorbed in the art. You're the greatest, Fenris!
Anyway, like I said, trying to be helpful not critical. Probably wouldn't have said anything if I'd seen your comment about the spelling errors below the picture, but by that point I was absorbed in the art. You're the greatest, Fenris!
I'm gonna have to call myth on the 'alcohol keeps you warm' bit. It may cause a slight, temporary feeling of warmth in the skin by dilating blood vessels, but this comes at the cost of lowering your core body temperature and making you MORE likely to catch hypothermia, not less/
12 - I can't help but wonder if Threadsong currency isn't things like lil game tokens or buttons for "coins" and playing cards for larger "notes"
Also, 15 - ALWAYS MORE ROPE... And make sure it's silk, not that silly hemp stuff... >.>.. Wouldn't want a "fellow adventurer" to slip out of a "risque..." >.>... <.<... I mean "RISKY" situation... X3
Also, 15 - ALWAYS MORE ROPE... And make sure it's silk, not that silly hemp stuff... >.>.. Wouldn't want a "fellow adventurer" to slip out of a "risque..." >.>... <.<... I mean "RISKY" situation... X3
You missed off a quite important item there. Best to remind your readers that a Sword is also very important while crossing the wilderness...
...Honestly, do you know how hard it was for me to kill that baby wyvern with an old pan and a broken smoking pipe? Really, your just giving your readers bad information at this point...
...Honestly, do you know how hard it was for me to kill that baby wyvern with an old pan and a broken smoking pipe? Really, your just giving your readers bad information at this point...
Goodness, this is just so well detailed! Not only the illustrations, but also Aislin describing them and their importance! As well as provides some insight as to who/what Aislin is, while not diving into her story just yet. Really really sweet! =D
She discusses how magical charms provide the best protection. I guess that could be anything from helping protect one from poisons, to possibly even an entire physical blow every once in a while, perhaps?
She discusses how magical charms provide the best protection. I guess that could be anything from helping protect one from poisons, to possibly even an entire physical blow every once in a while, perhaps?
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