THIS IS WEIRD CAUSE like... it's not done... kinda? It's being mixed by a friend but I was too excited about it. I had to put it out.
This is a commission for
lucycatx3 that's kind of long overdue.
She wasn't sure what she wanted so I wrote something about us and our nonspecific experiences.
QUICK! What band have a ripped off hardcore in this one?
Lyrics:
Lucy I know that I didn’t tell you
Where I was fallin’ this time, gimme an
inch and I might take the whole white road and
It’s not gonna be comin’ for a while.
Where all the roses open I can
find my shadow, ah
in burst the ponding creatures
waiting in my head
Hey!
My eyes are closin’, I can’t hear the music so
let’s not make another mistake
no broken whiskers, do you know what I mean?
K-k-k-kitty kitty
Lucy I know that I didn’t tell you
where we were goin this time, I tell ya I
don’t know the names and I might know the number
we might be goin for a ride
Lucy I know that I didn’t mention
if we’d be comin’ home a live, maybe I know
when we’ll be reaching our final destination,
but maybe that’s only a lie
This is a commission for
lucycatx3 that's kind of long overdue.She wasn't sure what she wanted so I wrote something about us and our nonspecific experiences.
QUICK! What band have a ripped off hardcore in this one?
Lyrics:
Lucy I know that I didn’t tell you
Where I was fallin’ this time, gimme an
inch and I might take the whole white road and
It’s not gonna be comin’ for a while.
Where all the roses open I can
find my shadow, ah
in burst the ponding creatures
waiting in my head
Hey!
My eyes are closin’, I can’t hear the music so
let’s not make another mistake
no broken whiskers, do you know what I mean?
K-k-k-kitty kitty
Lucy I know that I didn’t tell you
where we were goin this time, I tell ya I
don’t know the names and I might know the number
we might be goin for a ride
Lucy I know that I didn’t mention
if we’d be comin’ home a live, maybe I know
when we’ll be reaching our final destination,
but maybe that’s only a lie
Category Music / All
Species Coyote
Size 120 x 75px
File Size 5.66 MB
Yeah I ripped off this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5uoxaUnlR10
AND I DIDN'T EVEN REALIZE MY LYRICAL BRILLIANCE X3
wow that was accidental but makes me seem clever.
AND I DIDN'T EVEN REALIZE MY LYRICAL BRILLIANCE X3
wow that was accidental but makes me seem clever.
Hrm...if I may critique, I feel like the third verse needs something to differentiate itself from how the first and second verses sound. Maybe something like singing in a lower octave and building back up.
Also, I have no idea what I'm talking about, musically. Just something I think you oughta experiment with. :l
Also, I have no idea what I'm talking about, musically. Just something I think you oughta experiment with. :l
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