Well, good story Guardian-Hawk, I hope that Hueroc and his family can get back their house, let´s wait for what will happen next.
It soo detailed, I could imagine everything in my mind, you are really a good writer, congrats.

They still have their cave... but their daughter is much more important than that!

Thanks.

Well, yeah, I agree, the sons are their treasure
Ellora and Hueroc do all to protect them, just like in our world...

Omg. Such clifhanger D: D: D: how can you doo that to us readers.
now we must wait T..T

but honestly i am afraid about Loria too T..T. where should i sign in for a rescue mission D:

It's a pretty dangerous situation yes! But how to track them underground..?

someone would say with kind of echo location but that is only good to check your surroundings.Soo...

It could depend how much magic id Cortuss use to escape. The slightly presence of it in the ground could probably be felt . but you would need someone that can use simmilar ground magick. It could be harder if there would be some older tunnels that he used so there could the trail end.

It could be easier if Neth had more skills in his psychic abilities. but still maybe he could be useful. Since he was with his siblings and family all the time he is used to feel their presence around him. With one member missing his inner piece must be in discomfort (not to mention everyone fear about Loria). Maybe with Elloras guidience and some other skillend dragon, it could be used as a compas. Closer to Loria he should feel less in discomfort.

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Ok this is my imaginary plot twit. you probably have something figured out ^^;

That must be the sadest twist ever

It was hard yes D:

will you pick up this storyline again? i wanna see/read them getting back together again

Eventually...

I can't wait it was one of the first stories i read on the site, and soon after found myself writing as well, i just started posting on my own, i'm not great at english, , so if you would take the time so read and comment it, it would be a great help third piece comes out today, finally got english vocabulary to word, so there will hopefully be less wrong words in the future, even though the gramma might not be correct at all times
Hope you'll take the time

D: This is really bad and sad ): I hope Loria will be alright, I hope they will find her one day.

Hopefully!

So, so hopefully you choose to continue this. I'm hooked like a bass on a jig. I really want to know how this plays out! Keep up the great work Hawk.

I do mean to continue this, eventually...

Yay! You gotta admit, you left it on one HECK of a cliffhanger. And as usual, your stories are awesome and so enjoyable to read.

It's been six years and we are still waiting on a conclusion and this ending might be really good sense he is more experienced in writing.
(Please don't take this in a bad way) because I think your an amazing story teller.

v.v

Does that mean you are planning one or... If your not it's ok because I know you have been going through stuff in personal life but... You know.

Is this the last thing you've written in the last seven years that isn't mostly or entirely porn?

I do mean to come back to this, I put a few words into the next piece of the arc occasionally, I just.. haven't 😔
As for other SFW things, Nightmare is the most recent thing categorized as a story that actually made it to my gallery, but you'll find art like this one sometimes comes with a story attached. There's also some things that I've worked on but never quite made it into a state to make them worth posting x)