It's been a long time since I got to sit down and write something for just myself, and I may be a little bit out of practice when it comes to writing something that doesn't have a basic structure to it. That is why I'm submitting this Prologue to you all to look at. I want you all to look over it, read it (it's very short), and tell me what you think.
I know that there's grammar problems so don't bother telling me about that, but I want to know what you all think about the general idea of the story. From here basically the main characters, which are four adventurers get the amulet from a tournament and then get attacked by forces trying to claim the amulet so they set out on a quest to try and work their way towards the source of that attack, some king in a distant land, to find out what's going on all the while battling monsters, and righting wrongs, and doing as adventurers do.
And yes, this is a remake of the story that I started writing so long ago before I started taking commissions, still taking commissions btw.
So I want everyone's opinion on this, don't hold back if you think it sounds stupid. I'm building a consensus.
I know that there's grammar problems so don't bother telling me about that, but I want to know what you all think about the general idea of the story. From here basically the main characters, which are four adventurers get the amulet from a tournament and then get attacked by forces trying to claim the amulet so they set out on a quest to try and work their way towards the source of that attack, some king in a distant land, to find out what's going on all the while battling monsters, and righting wrongs, and doing as adventurers do.
And yes, this is a remake of the story that I started writing so long ago before I started taking commissions, still taking commissions btw.
So I want everyone's opinion on this, don't hold back if you think it sounds stupid. I'm building a consensus.
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