By: Bluehusky21
Stat:
Husky
Ht6ft 5in
Weight 270bls
Built very muscular
Male
Type fighter
Name: Jin
Stat
Wolf
Ht 6ft 4in
Weight 265bls
Built very muscular
Male
Type fighter
Name: Dago
THE fight
PART 1
It is Sunday, and I will beat the crap out of this husky. He will learn the meaning of pain. Heeeeheee. Dan what time is it. It is 7:00pm sir (Dan is trembling with fear.) Dan then said you want any thing before the fight sir. Dago said NO! Get out of here now! (Dan runs out knocking over some chairs.)
Do you thin I can be him sir? (Said Jin) yes you can (said ken) he may be the champ but you have some thing he does not have. Huh? A heart and a spirit to fight do not let any one take that away form you. (jin) Thank you very much Ken I owe you every thing you have trained me well. (Ken said to him self)[Please let him win it would me the world to me]
IT IS TIME
Announcer (okay folks let get ready to fight are you ready) crowd (YES!!!!!!) Announcer (I can’t hear you ARE YOU READY) Crowd (YES, YES FIGHT, FIGHT, FIGHT) Announcer (Okay in the right hand side we have DAGOOO!!! The five time Champ of the heavy weight class.) Crowd (Yeah, yeah go, go you can do it, go, go, you are a winner, Winner.) Announcer (Okay in the left hand side we have Jin the Challenger!!!!)
Crowd (Yeah, yeah go, go you can do it, go, go, you are a winner, Winner.) {They both walk to the ring. They both get in and measure each other. The heat for these guys is pouring out of them. The air is filled with angry and rage form both.} Announcer (okay lets weigh them folks The champ will be first.) {Dago step on the scale it reads 265bls} announcer (we have the Champ weighing at 265bls!!) Crowd (yeah cool you can beat him. Fight, fight, and fight!!!!!) Announcer (okay now the challenger) {jin steps on the scale and weighs at 270bls} announcer (we have the challenger weighing in at 270bls!!!) crowd ( yeah, good boy, beat him, fight, fight, you got it kid, go teach him a lesson.)
Announcer (okay get to your corners fighters.) {They both go there corner jin on the left, and dago on the right} Announcer (okay get ready and fight!!!!!!!) {They both go after each other and…)
TO BE CONTINUED
IF you would like to read more please comment and let me know if you want too.
THANKS YOU.
Stat:
Husky
Ht6ft 5in
Weight 270bls
Built very muscular
Male
Type fighter
Name: Jin
Stat
Wolf
Ht 6ft 4in
Weight 265bls
Built very muscular
Male
Type fighter
Name: Dago
THE fight
PART 1
It is Sunday, and I will beat the crap out of this husky. He will learn the meaning of pain. Heeeeheee. Dan what time is it. It is 7:00pm sir (Dan is trembling with fear.) Dan then said you want any thing before the fight sir. Dago said NO! Get out of here now! (Dan runs out knocking over some chairs.)
Do you thin I can be him sir? (Said Jin) yes you can (said ken) he may be the champ but you have some thing he does not have. Huh? A heart and a spirit to fight do not let any one take that away form you. (jin) Thank you very much Ken I owe you every thing you have trained me well. (Ken said to him self)[Please let him win it would me the world to me]
IT IS TIME
Announcer (okay folks let get ready to fight are you ready) crowd (YES!!!!!!) Announcer (I can’t hear you ARE YOU READY) Crowd (YES, YES FIGHT, FIGHT, FIGHT) Announcer (Okay in the right hand side we have DAGOOO!!! The five time Champ of the heavy weight class.) Crowd (Yeah, yeah go, go you can do it, go, go, you are a winner, Winner.) Announcer (Okay in the left hand side we have Jin the Challenger!!!!)
Crowd (Yeah, yeah go, go you can do it, go, go, you are a winner, Winner.) {They both walk to the ring. They both get in and measure each other. The heat for these guys is pouring out of them. The air is filled with angry and rage form both.} Announcer (okay lets weigh them folks The champ will be first.) {Dago step on the scale it reads 265bls} announcer (we have the Champ weighing at 265bls!!) Crowd (yeah cool you can beat him. Fight, fight, and fight!!!!!) Announcer (okay now the challenger) {jin steps on the scale and weighs at 270bls} announcer (we have the challenger weighing in at 270bls!!!) crowd ( yeah, good boy, beat him, fight, fight, you got it kid, go teach him a lesson.)
Announcer (okay get to your corners fighters.) {They both go there corner jin on the left, and dago on the right} Announcer (okay get ready and fight!!!!!!!) {They both go after each other and…)
TO BE CONTINUED
IF you would like to read more please comment and let me know if you want too.
THANKS YOU.
Category Story / All
Species Dog (Other)
Size 104 x 120px
File Size 22.5 kB
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