Bout time! Tasty Arcanine treat!

Hehe, glad you enjoyed it. x3

And I'm glad to have finally finished writing the Sore Losers alt endings. :3

I really enjoyed this ending, especially that belch at the end, heheh x3

Very well done!

The ending I have been waiting to see for a good while now, thank you for providing it.

I hope it was what you were hoping it'd be x3

I put this one off because I couldn't find a unique spin for it, but I think I did pretty well.

You did very well and it was certainly worth the wait, smaller preds getting ahold of larger prey just adds a thrill to vore for me.

I was right about the alternate ending x3

This one was really good. I liked the whole laughing about it not happening and then it happens cx

Great story~

Aww yea! Spice needs to tackle big prey more often, this is great stuff!

And so concludes the multiple possible endings of Sore Losers. Am I disappointed that it's over? Maybe a little. Am I disappointed it ended on Spice with a belly bigger than himself? Heck no! :P

What a awesome final ending to the alternate endings, I think I like this one the most. Never underestimate Spice unless you want to be eaten. He probably could have eaten Treat too, though maybe one day he will end up eating her. x3

theres another alternate ending for that they made

This is a very interesting ending o:

It kindof reminds me of my recent one, in a way... the imperfect hypnosis gives that vibe, methinks |D;

Looking forward to another "tasty tale" sometime soon c|


... though that reminds me, I have a story I should be doing now >:V

Write on, fellow writer! :D

Glad you enjoyed the story, Spice sure does like his hypnosis x3

It was very good, though there was one gripe that left me wanting more, but then it'd just devolve into one of those "interactive" stories even more than it already technically is >:V

Spice is still the master of tricking any lucky prey he has in mind, hehe. I enjoyed this alternate ending the most, well worth the wait, especially with his teasing nature and that belch as a "goodbye" of sorts. Now he's Ninetales pudge, and who knows if that's a good thing or a bad thing for Spice's appearance.

very nicely done! Was a very enjoyable read, and I am, as always, eager for your next piece!

you did great =) should have him eat both of them thought

like when treat is trying to help rusty she gets stuck and he slurps her ribbons in too

Heh, I think I'm done writing alternate endings for this story. xD

Maybe if I hit 500 watchers I'll do it as a celebration. :P

should do some alternate endings to pokemon movies thought

keldeo and jurachi movies are vore worthy

Oh yey, was fun to see the hypnosis in effect, but then thats what should happen if a big wuff underestimates a small one. Nice turn about.

Lol

Great writing but I have one nitpick:

I doubt a event traumatic enough to give somebody permanent stage fright, one where she watched on of her best friends get eaten...
would develop into a fetish.
That kind of thing can cause a phobia of contests and Spice. Or even PTSD. SOTreat should be wanting to see hr friends be eaten by Spice, because she'll be too scared of him.

This also cements my theory that Spice has Anti-social personality disorder.

I honestly wouldn't be surprised if he did... though I like to think he's more of a Narcissist (He might even be both!). Also, I guess you've got a point there. I suppose I tried to pick it back up from being a totally dark ending by going "and now Treat is sexy-like", though I must admit it probably didn't make much sense in the context of the situation.

Hopefully I can get better at that in the future.

Research is key
When you've done 3 hours of straight research, you've not done enough
Especially if you're doing it for a story you're gonna scrap

;-;

PS: Spice is much more than a narcissist. He's literlly murdered dozens of pokemon
And he shows no remorse.
Most people go into shock after they realised that they killed someone.
Not Spice, he'll do it again for fun.

Definitly a psychopath.

Couldn't that be said about all predators though?

I mean, if you take a look at vore as a genre it's this kind of character that makes up 80% of predators, at least from my viewing experience. A lot of people don't really think about the implications or go beyond a quick grab-and-gulp kind of situation. While pred-shaming seems to be more common these days (having the predator reflect on what they've done, having the prey's family come in for a "How could you?!") it's not really the tone I write for.

Perhaps I should tag my fatal stuff better, but I don't want to take a pleasant story and write in four paragraphs of crying over the prey or shaming the predator. In a vague attempt at defending him, Spice's nature is due to his upbringing, his trainer has taught him that he is the only pokemon in the world that matters... perhaps now I'm just justifying his actions by saying he's a brainwashed psychopath, but I think he's coming out of that in the main series... this was just a callback to a darker time.

Not to mention he's a pokemon, cats don't have remorse for the many mice they kill.

..erf, I hope that didn't come across wrong. I'm not very good at arguing my point... or at conflict in general.

well said

I'm not saying for you to bog down your stories with that stuff.

And frankly, a pokemon psychopath might be defined differently than a human psychopath due to that. So I dunno.
And frankly, I bet quite a few people with ASPD were raised that way, or their upbringing resulted in them acting that way.
Because childhood matters more than most people think

Heh. Finally getting caught up enough on things to read this, and I have to say that I enjoyed this ending better.

The 'good guys' are always expected to win, but with Spice being a predator who has done this before, he has the experience and know how on how to overcome his prey, and wind up as the victor. He may meet his fate some day, but I always find it more satisfying when it doesn't happen right away. Letting the 'bad guy' win, is what makes them the bad guy. It makes any future stories with the character more uncertain of the outcome, never knowing for sure, when or if he might ever lose.

Plus, I also loved the fact that Rusty and Treat were relatively jovial and casual about the whole thing, which only drove Spice's determination further. In a way, Rusty got what he deserved, by mocking Spice as much as he had. :)

Hey, glad you enjoyed the ending. ^^

it felt a little weird letting Spice win, the whole thing had a much darker feel so I tried to play it off as though he were ever so slightly in the right because Rusty and Treat got so careless. I'm sure he was just teaching Treat a valuable lesson about appearances being deceiving... one that she's never going to forget. ;P

do not forget about rusty as fat lol

This is wonderful!