Nice, inspired by bleach by any chance? Reads really well, personally I think it should be a bleach opening whether it was inspired by it or not! hehe

XD, how did you know?! lol
I was inspired by the third or fifth opening to Bleach, cuz the name of the song was called, "Rolling Star", so I incorperated it into the poem, but the poem is way off from the song lol.
That would be way cool if it was used for a bleach opening. How I would love that ^^ I could honestly say, I would feel like the luckiest man on earth if it was used XD

Its catchy. But my musical side sucks and is highly strange XD

same, I would probably end up turning it into some form of opera, or classical form of music as a bleach opening XD then a rock or something like the ones they have now.

nice word play and agreed it is quite catchy you have a way with words

wow, wasn't expecting a comment on something from so long ago x33
Thank you so much for the comment ^^
this was from awhile back when I got inspired so easily over simple things, and I had more of a darker outlook on life. I almost kind of miss it