That's a really enjoyable read! All the way through, you maintained that imagery of the size difference between the two main characters and how big Kamagi got (as well as how large Ehanu was through the whole story). Your diverse vocabulary adds to that experience too, to the point that I questioned myself on if I knew just how big the characters were/got. That kept me intrigued. You've got a great knack for writing fat fur-themed stories, I really should read them more. I even learned a couple of words reading this, how about that? ^^ Really good work, well done!

Oh em gosh, Tene, this comment incredibly upped the awesomeness of an already-good day. Your compliments turned a shining star of a day into a blazingly-bright supernova! It is comments like yours that really push me to continue writing and continue to challenge myself with new territories and, heck, even new subject matter.

Thank you so much for this, Tene. This comment was seriously the highlight of my day. ^////////=////////^

QUite an amazing storny, Ehanu! I throughly enjoyed reading it! ^^

Thanks, Mani! ^w^

OOh >u< Gosh, I love this! Like Tene said, the diverse vocab really brings everything out! And you nailed personality, down to the t (or i in this case I guess). All the inner thought really portrays all the little quips a not-so-little-anymore mantis would have! Hilarous how it started too, after eating cereal, deciding to get a job there! A silly thing I would do in the pursuit of honey :3

Thank you again for this, I love it so~ :'3

Yayyyyyy, I'm so very glad that you like it! I did my best to make it as fun as I could, as well as adding as much interesting things to it as possible.

'twas a fun trade, it was a pleasure doing with you ^w^