Man, you certainly went through a lotta stuff on these! How'd everyone like 'em?

It's been quite a few years, so I don't really remember too much. I *know* that Athelind liked them, of course. And I seem to remember a fairly positive response. Strong, but not overwhelmingly so.

hehe X3 such a lucky draggy i cant wait for the next installment

I haven't written for a while, really. I have a few half-finished stories that have been bouncing around in my head for years, and one really old story (not of this nature) that I'm not really sure I even want to bother digging out. But we shall see, on all counts.

i knows i read through all of em theys good ^.=.^

interesting. more would be good.

You know, lots of people say that. ;)

Great sequal!

This was interesting but then it got scary when his plates started to split I thought that was his real skin but then I remembered this is a sort of medieval type setting so that idea quickly drew me back into the story when I realized it was probably armor plating like the type to protect your body from injury.

So with all this in mind I have to say this was an interesting read in the fact you're glad his stomach wasn't splitting open to where the story would get weird and quite scary.

The only thing I noticed was you mixed up both character's genders once calling them him/him instead of him/her.

Yeah, that was meant to be a little bit of a startle, but I hope it was explained quickly enough. Glad you enjoyed the story otherwise (more or less), and I may have to read back through it to see if I can find that glitch you're referring to.

You know I read through it again where I thought the error was and I didn't see one.. Sorry man this tiny text plays games with my eyes

It's so small my eyes think they are seeing something they really aren't.

I've always had a problem with trying to read small text. My dyslexic brain and ADD eyes just don't register with small text very well.

I've always had trouble trying to read small text because my eyes just don't have the focus for it sometimes.

I apologize to you for giving you false info