Nobody's ever where they want to be.

Not true.. there are those that are where they belong.. I'm just lost

That's not a bad bit of poetry (especially for FA. :) ) I like the idiosyncratic structure you give the main stanzas (8/3/6 syllables). I like the repetition of lines too, and the title/basic idea.

It's a little unfortunate that the construction "without you my spirit's sorest," is a little awkward and will sound moreso when said aloud (it resembled "spirits soarest," as in, an archaic way of saying "my spirits are flying overhead"-- not that that's what you mean, but the ear will be I think a little confused.)

*shrug*