I'd love some critique and redlines.. she'll be sitting at a table when I'm done so you won't see anything below the line.
Uhm.. yea, Please. D:
Uhm.. yea, Please. D:
Category Scraps / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 700 x 694px
File Size 410 kB
Everything looks great, Mazz. Only thing I see that looks odd is the placement of the nose triangle. It doesnt seem to line up quite right with the muzzle. Otherwise, I'm very suprised by this! Your work has improved alot since i first started seeing your art!
Others have already pointed out the nose, and her left shoulder. I'd also bring the arm further down so her arm isn't resting on the edge of the table, it would add more depth.
As far as her right eye, it seems canted at a steeper line than her left. I don't think it necessarily needs to be moved to the right or to the left, so much as rotated a tad counter-clockwise.
Getting more nit-picky....unless her hair is a mohawk, I'd extend hairline behind her left ear, instead of stopping the hairline right before it.
I like her smile, and I really like her furriness, & the tail-floof. ^_^
As far as her right eye, it seems canted at a steeper line than her left. I don't think it necessarily needs to be moved to the right or to the left, so much as rotated a tad counter-clockwise.
Getting more nit-picky....unless her hair is a mohawk, I'd extend hairline behind her left ear, instead of stopping the hairline right before it.
I like her smile, and I really like her furriness, & the tail-floof. ^_^
Nah, her hair is all spikey in the back but should actually go behind her ear like you mean. It does kind of look like a mohawk doesn't it. lol
Thankyou, I will get to work fixing all the things pointed out to me. I can see what it should look like already!
Thank you so much. <3
Thankyou, I will get to work fixing all the things pointed out to me. I can see what it should look like already!
Thank you so much. <3
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