Ugh... I hope this is okay >.> I'm so, so bad at greenery. I've always pretty much been fail at it. It's so hard for me. But this picture pretty much needed... I did what I could, really I did ^^;
I don't even know what to say about this. I messed up quite a bit of it. But there's also quite a few things I like about it... I'm not sure. I hope it's okay xD
hikit
I don't even know what to say about this. I messed up quite a bit of it. But there's also quite a few things I like about it... I'm not sure. I hope it's okay xD
hikit
Category Artwork (Traditional) / General Furry Art
Species Vulpine (Other)
Size 621 x 813px
File Size 157.3 kB
Its looks liek you got a lot of greenery practice. It almost seems cluttered, though, but it does set the scene.
Like what you did with the distant trees. I've seen a few artists not put lines (least thick ones) on objects that are designed to be distant as it really helps with the depth of the background. The walkway and the gateway look really, really good.
The end of the forward sleeve seems a bit... big... then again, I've never seen/wore an outfit like this, so I'm going by minor assumption. I have a feeling that it would cuff out like that, but not nearly as much. Though the overall lines and folds on the cloth look solid.
Your fur texture technique you've adapted is working really well, especially on his tail and hair. I always loved how you did your eyes and facial expressions. And nice job with the ear fluff.
Don't mind the wall of text. Just kind of passing my interpretation of the piece. Its a very good one overall, even if you didn't want to nit-pick yourself over it.
Like what you did with the distant trees. I've seen a few artists not put lines (least thick ones) on objects that are designed to be distant as it really helps with the depth of the background. The walkway and the gateway look really, really good.
The end of the forward sleeve seems a bit... big... then again, I've never seen/wore an outfit like this, so I'm going by minor assumption. I have a feeling that it would cuff out like that, but not nearly as much. Though the overall lines and folds on the cloth look solid.
Your fur texture technique you've adapted is working really well, especially on his tail and hair. I always loved how you did your eyes and facial expressions. And nice job with the ear fluff.
Don't mind the wall of text. Just kind of passing my interpretation of the piece. Its a very good one overall, even if you didn't want to nit-pick yourself over it.
Yeah, it probably is cluttered... I'm really terrible at plant stuffs. I'm hoping to improve that a lot with painstuff... it's a lot easier to do that sorta thing in paint, I find. My eventual plan is to switch to a paint/pencil mix permanantly, and leave pure pencil pictures behind. They just take too much time, and are too hard on the hand... and are frustrating as hell to draw... and don't look so great, often, as you can sorta see here >.>
I've always had a tendancy to oversize the ends of sleeves for some reason. It's just a bad habit. Though I do remember the outfit refs being quite poofy, I'm sure I over-exaggerated a bit. It's just a bad habit of mine ^^;
But, I'm glad all in all you don't think it's too terrible. x3 Thanks :3
I've always had a tendancy to oversize the ends of sleeves for some reason. It's just a bad habit. Though I do remember the outfit refs being quite poofy, I'm sure I over-exaggerated a bit. It's just a bad habit of mine ^^;
But, I'm glad all in all you don't think it's too terrible. x3 Thanks :3
One, plants are often cluttered, it's how they grow. Two, the only thing your plants could be accused of is being amazingly fluffy. Three, the sleeves don't look too terribly different from the sleeves on the Gi I used to train in.
Therefore, all said, I hereby declare this picture to be awesomeness.
Therefore, all said, I hereby declare this picture to be awesomeness.
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