Yeah, I could tell you worked hard on it since it very heart felt and don't belittle yourself it's better than not bad it's great.

...Wow... just...Wow..

And in the sun's bright glory I stand and watch you bask,
From the world of happiness and love, no more should I ask;
Enough to sustain and bear me on steady wings is your love,
as it hefts and hods me above, up to the sky, where upon clouds we lie,
and in night cool embrace, our hearts race, as into one anothers eyes we gaze.

I don't need my skin, or heart, or bones or muscles to love you.
All I need is my soul and spirit, and and those are whole.
In times anew, back to times old. I love you always.