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Matte painting project, as the title would suggest the scene had to transition to night. Both artificial and natural light sources were required.
Insightful critism of any sort, as always, would be most appreciated and respected.
**Update**
Made some slight changes based off suggestions from the instructor and of a most respected blackdragon
Insightful critism of any sort, as always, would be most appreciated and respected.
**Update**
Made some slight changes based off suggestions from the instructor and of a most respected blackdragon
Category Artwork (Digital) / Scenery
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 695 x 1040px
File Size 190.1 kB
Ah, very nicely done.
Might it be that the light from ceiling lamps is a bit too narrow in radius on the ground? Just look at the covers. I think they should be more spread out. Lightbulbs stick out slightly..
Otherwise it's very nicely done. Left-over shadows left from the Day can be ignored.
Might it be that the light from ceiling lamps is a bit too narrow in radius on the ground? Just look at the covers. I think they should be more spread out. Lightbulbs stick out slightly..
Otherwise it's very nicely done. Left-over shadows left from the Day can be ignored.
Here's what I notice:
- Most noticable are the window panes. They are reflective surfaces, and they do not appear to be reflecting anything in the room.
- The light visible through the windows appears artificial... like a white-to-black radial gradient was used. I would recommend breaking up the gradient, or not using one at all.
- The edges around the window panes need to be anti-aliased a bit more. The black lines contrast with the gradient, making it obvious. If no gradient was used, it wouldn't be noticable.
- The highlight on the foreground pipe to the left needs to be broken up more, like the original. Also, for some reason, it "feels" like plastic, rather than paint.
- I would recommend using a cloning tool (this is a digital matte painting, right?) to cover up that highlight on the rightmost support column.
Other than that, it's very nicely done. I certainly wouldn't want to be caught alone in that place at night.
- Most noticable are the window panes. They are reflective surfaces, and they do not appear to be reflecting anything in the room.
- The light visible through the windows appears artificial... like a white-to-black radial gradient was used. I would recommend breaking up the gradient, or not using one at all.
- The edges around the window panes need to be anti-aliased a bit more. The black lines contrast with the gradient, making it obvious. If no gradient was used, it wouldn't be noticable.
- The highlight on the foreground pipe to the left needs to be broken up more, like the original. Also, for some reason, it "feels" like plastic, rather than paint.
- I would recommend using a cloning tool (this is a digital matte painting, right?) to cover up that highlight on the rightmost support column.
Other than that, it's very nicely done. I certainly wouldn't want to be caught alone in that place at night.
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