try take less-bright colors like for the red, (make it towards the black/white side of color picking) also green... well pretty much all colors, since they remove a lot of the shade...

same goes for "complete black" and "complete white" ... those also remove a lot of the shading :3

(and need bluring at the markings things)

not being harmfull, just trying to help you make things better ^w^ have fun!

Ik xD im using a phone app so thats half the reason I cant blur

As for the colors shading thanks that will help alot :D

I loves it <3 my first gift art ever and its a amazing plus it was done by the lovely Pup

Hehe :3