Well, if it's your first drawing, it's a good beginning. Although it needs a bit of polishing, the overall base is good.
As a suggestion, drawing from a reference (a picture, a photo, etc.) of the animal you want to draw can give you an idea of facial proportions (which look a bit distorted right now :P).
And, if you want to be better, don't forget to practice, practice, practice and practice again. That's the best way to go forward! ;)
Welcome to Furaffinity, BTW! :D

Thank you for the feedback . I know if I keep at this I should be able to create great content. I know practice makes perfect and I have a long ways to go before I can achieve perfection. Thank you for the welcome to FA btw

I'm not a good artist so I'll refrain from trying to give much critique, but it looks like a good start to me. I think the main thing with this image is that you need to work on your muzzle structures. Aside from that - good start!

Make sure to draw on plain paper also - it's worth it for the end result!

Also, thanks for the Watch!

Thank for the feedback and yeah the lines on my notebook paper does make it look worse but the lines are just to help me draw. Also yeah my muzzle could use some work.
Thanks for the critiquing btw always appreciated. And don't mention the watch, I love how you write characters psychology, likes, preferences, and back story. Really cool work.

Thank you!