This is another picture of Ren I'm working on. While he is a member of the Holy Order of the White Cross, Ren is a knight-errant and spends most of his time roaming the Frontier regions of the Federation, looking for rampaging Demons and other Altlings which cannot be taken care of by the local authorities. While generally nice and friendly (if a bit reserved), Ren may become a personification of wrath in battle; however, even then he tries to avoid killing his opponent as long as it is possible. However, he isn't likely to show mercy upon someone who has been killing innocents. In such cases Ren won't be holding back.
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Because I just have to look for loopholes, a couple of questions:
How does he know someone has been killing innocents? What if they weren't innocent or the killer had a very, very good reason for going on a rampage?
What if his opponent wasn't actually the killer?
That aside, it looks pretty good but you want to watch those legs. Way too long, IMHO.
Also, evil is cool-looking, but when do we get to see Ren not in a violent mood?
How does he know someone has been killing innocents? What if they weren't innocent or the killer had a very, very good reason for going on a rampage?
What if his opponent wasn't actually the killer?
That aside, it looks pretty good but you want to watch those legs. Way too long, IMHO.
Also, evil is cool-looking, but when do we get to see Ren not in a violent mood?
Well, the Order makes an investigation first. It actually has an extensive net of agents across the Federation. Besides, Ren himself investigates the matter when he arrives at his destination. And if Ren finds undeniable proof that his target was actually murdering innocents, Evil will be Smote. Hard.
As for the legs, I can't help it. When I try to make them shorter, I get a feeling that they are too short. :<
And I promise that next time I draw Ren he won't look like he is going to Cleave And Smite Evil (or something). :3
As for the legs, I can't help it. When I try to make them shorter, I get a feeling that they are too short. :<
And I promise that next time I draw Ren he won't look like he is going to Cleave And Smite Evil (or something). :3
Sounds fairly sensible. Though if he was simply an enforcer, that would have opened up some interesting plot ideas where his controller was trying to eliminate someone by giving him a false report on them to frame them as a rogue Altling.
Last I saw Keaton seems to have improved a lot with the leg thing, you might want to ask her.
Last I saw Keaton seems to have improved a lot with the leg thing, you might want to ask her.
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