Besides grammar mistakes. Like i messed up a case . Im doing a 500 word report for my arrogant (?) Who. Should put a comma after, and. For man im tired i could see thst as a thought. More than text bubble.

When kajima swear. For more effect why not all caps with exclamation marks.

But, sounds like a pretty good idea. We need more posdible . Love, action, and mystery. Hope you keep it up :) it looks very good. Just check your grammar. You won't believe how picky people are _=_=

Well I never did say my grammar was perfect but thanks for the criticism I'll edit and the worlds later

No problem hopefully people like your story :) if you ever wrght a script for it. Id be happy to help in grammar parts.

An best of luck to you

Looks awesome so far

Thank you ☺️

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This is epic Setton23 and i'm really impressed with your collaboration teamwork.

Once again your inspiring my artwork.

thanks your too much

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