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Finished in a hurry so I could post it with the sequel.
Years after I came up with the concept, I learned how a big, buff boyfriend who exercises and cooks for you is one of the biggest gay fantasy clichés. In my defense, I was a teenager. : p And, in the end, this is mean to be pure wish fullfilment, so take it as it is. Hope it's still fun and exciting for you.
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Years after I came up with the concept, I learned how a big, buff boyfriend who exercises and cooks for you is one of the biggest gay fantasy clichés. In my defense, I was a teenager. : p And, in the end, this is mean to be pure wish fullfilment, so take it as it is. Hope it's still fun and exciting for you.
Story and characters @
Venombahamut
Category Story / Paw
Species Human
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 12.1 kB
Listed in Folders
Aww, thank you! ^.=.^ I am too. = P Though I myself tend to prefer shorter guys (hard to find as that is. : p), I also enjoy the typical image of being protected, literally or metaphorically, by a larger, stronger guy who absolutely adores you. Usually by wrapping his arms around you. Forgetting all about your problems inside the warm comfort of a bath, while knowing said strong guy is watching over you, protecting you, and doing everything he can to make you comfortable... well, who wouldn't melt over that? = D
And yay! I succeeded! The main problem I had with writing this was exactly nailing that aura of relaxation. It was the main theme I wanted to forward with this story.
I'm glad you enjoyed it. = D
And yay! I succeeded! The main problem I had with writing this was exactly nailing that aura of relaxation. It was the main theme I wanted to forward with this story.
I'm glad you enjoyed it. = D
This was a very fun read. ^^
I just loved the character dynamics between Call and Kote. Kote just sounds purrfect for cozying up to in bed with his soft and fluffy white and striped fur. I can easily envision this adorable scene, with these two in the bathtub, just louning around and playing with each other's feet/paws. The description of said feet was......very lovely to imagine as they were nuzzled, massaged and kissed too. ^///^ I also liked how you kept Cal's nationality and skin color a mystery, it enables anyone to put themselves in Cal's sho-feet. ^^
Its about time I got to reading tickle stories again after so long, and reading this was very pleasant. Cale and Kote make such a cute couple.
I just loved the character dynamics between Call and Kote. Kote just sounds purrfect for cozying up to in bed with his soft and fluffy white and striped fur. I can easily envision this adorable scene, with these two in the bathtub, just louning around and playing with each other's feet/paws. The description of said feet was......very lovely to imagine as they were nuzzled, massaged and kissed too. ^///^ I also liked how you kept Cal's nationality and skin color a mystery, it enables anyone to put themselves in Cal's sho-feet. ^^
Its about time I got to reading tickle stories again after so long, and reading this was very pleasant. Cale and Kote make such a cute couple.
I'm overjoyed you liked it so much. ^.=.^
He really is. Managing the level of detail I should have to pass a strong image while still allowing space for the reader's imagination to picture whatever they prefer proved to be a toughie, but it seems like I managed to pull it off. = D
It wasn't just that. I didn't specify his what his job is, how rich they are, his hair color, his eye color, or even how big/tal he is, though I did try to imply Kote is physically bigger and stronger, even if just a little bit. Call was made so the reader could self-insert into his skin and feel his comfort after one of those long, hard days we've all had. I know I sure did. = D
Tickle stories, if well done, are even better than pics, IMO. They just leave more of a mark in my mind. I'm glad you're giving them another shot. Hope you find a lot you can enjoy. ; )
He really is. Managing the level of detail I should have to pass a strong image while still allowing space for the reader's imagination to picture whatever they prefer proved to be a toughie, but it seems like I managed to pull it off. = D
It wasn't just that. I didn't specify his what his job is, how rich they are, his hair color, his eye color, or even how big/tal he is, though I did try to imply Kote is physically bigger and stronger, even if just a little bit. Call was made so the reader could self-insert into his skin and feel his comfort after one of those long, hard days we've all had. I know I sure did. = D
Tickle stories, if well done, are even better than pics, IMO. They just leave more of a mark in my mind. I'm glad you're giving them another shot. Hope you find a lot you can enjoy. ; )
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