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Finally have something to show, it's very short but I like how I drew everything. Feedback is appreciated!!
Category Flash / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 550 x 400px
File Size 138.2 kB
This is really cool!
Now, only because you ask...and keep in mind I really don't know as I can't draw worth a crap. Or animate.
Its not much, only really that I think the light through the leaves may be slightly odd, how there is shine on the underside of the leaf, at the edge of the hole. Maybe it'll do a spill out effect, or maybe it should be confined just to where the hole is? IDK, I dont know how light works and its pretty anyway. (The one I mean is the second one, closer to the edge of the tree and the sky).
I love the small thing, like the clouds moving. You may not notice it at first, but I think its cool!
The sound is pretty dang spot on, very fitting. Did you actually go outside and record that? XD
Now, only because you ask...and keep in mind I really don't know as I can't draw worth a crap. Or animate.
Its not much, only really that I think the light through the leaves may be slightly odd, how there is shine on the underside of the leaf, at the edge of the hole. Maybe it'll do a spill out effect, or maybe it should be confined just to where the hole is? IDK, I dont know how light works and its pretty anyway. (The one I mean is the second one, closer to the edge of the tree and the sky).
I love the small thing, like the clouds moving. You may not notice it at first, but I think its cool!
The sound is pretty dang spot on, very fitting. Did you actually go outside and record that? XD
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