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Mother Machine - A narrative poem
Oh boy, i got some explaining to do for this one.
I had an idea pop into my head while listening to a certain song (I listed it in the beginning of the poem) and wanted to write it down, but the words I wanted to use never came out right. That's when it hit me: this was never meant to be a story, it was meant to be a poem. And so, I wrote this all down.
Gotta admit, this is a bit of a mess. I am not used to poems at all, and this feels very underwhelming. For the most part though, this was an experiment. Succeed of fail, the main goal here was to see what I was doing and how well I could do it.
Since this is an experiment, Comments are more welcome now than ever. I want to know what you guys and gals REALLY think of this thing.
I had an idea pop into my head while listening to a certain song (I listed it in the beginning of the poem) and wanted to write it down, but the words I wanted to use never came out right. That's when it hit me: this was never meant to be a story, it was meant to be a poem. And so, I wrote this all down.
Gotta admit, this is a bit of a mess. I am not used to poems at all, and this feels very underwhelming. For the most part though, this was an experiment. Succeed of fail, the main goal here was to see what I was doing and how well I could do it.
Since this is an experiment, Comments are more welcome now than ever. I want to know what you guys and gals REALLY think of this thing.
Category Poetry / All
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File Size 2.9 kB
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Absolutely loved reading this. I'm not usually one for poetry, but this really spoke to me.
this was a great read, and an interesting look on how technology and nature interact. They're usually pitted Against eachother, so to see technology mourning the death of nature is pretty cool :3
this was a great read, and an interesting look on how technology and nature interact. They're usually pitted Against eachother, so to see technology mourning the death of nature is pretty cool :3
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