Commission by hagraya
Commission for hagraya (Vore)
NOTES: This is a commission for hagraya. This’ll be another “paid” long story similar to the one that I’ve done in the previous commission. For those who stumble here randomly, please read the title carefully. This contains vore and if added a negative comment, you will be blocked without a warning. Thank you and I hope you enjoy.
We begin the story in a overhead shot of a Griffin-like creature roaming across the woods alone. His name is “Caratha,” and he is on a search for a predatory friend. He has orange, a long feathery-like tail, eagle claws on his forearms, hind-legs, long wings, sharp-edged beak, sharp eyes, and some red on his body including the edges of his wings and tail. The weather condition is sunny but the trees are blocking the sunlight. We follow Caratha with the camera as he wonders around alone. The wind is blowing a little, birds are chirping, and the bushes rustle a little from the wind.
Caratha: *Thoughts* (Hmm… Not a single pred in sight. I could’ve sworn that I was going the right way.)
Caratha continues his quest for a friend until he stumbles himself into a steep rocky hill. The camera follows him after he fell, he tossed and turned while rolling down the hill and he couldn’t use his wings due to being rolled around so much…
Meanwhile, we cut from there and we go to a close-up shot of a white sleeping dragon snoring away. He is lying down on his back, breathing belly is exposed, and feathery-like wings are flat on the ground. He is napping near at the same hill where Caratha is rolling down. In the background of this picture, we see a line of dust coming down towards the sleeping dragon. Eventually, Caratha accidentally landed right ontop of Vanilla’s belly and he bounced on it like it was a trampoline. The white dragon awakens from his slumberland and Caratha is spooked a little.
Vanilla: Well, well, a juicy bird landed on my tummy as I can see?
Caratha: Oh uh… *Scratches head* Th-thanks Mr. Dragon.
Vanilla: What is a wittle one like you doing here?
Caratha: Well, as you can see, I was wondering around in the woods looking for a new friend. Are you a good dragon?
Vanilla: *Giggle* You are looking at one right now.
Caratha: I’m glad to hear that. You seem like a good dragon.
Vanilla: Hehe, why not come a little closer and find out yourself?
Vanilla has says this with a smile trying to feel like he’s an innocent kitty-dragon… Caratha climbs up the chest of the large furry beast and the wind blows across the scene. It’s very quiet between the two of them. Caratha smiles up at the white beast after he is close to his muzzle.
Caratha: Umm… Can I ask you something Mr. Dragon?
Vanilla: Yes?
Caratha: I know this may be out of the blue but, can you eat me?
Vanilla: Hmmm… I suppose I can have a Griffin for breakfast.
Caratha: I would be happy about that!
Vanilla: Hehe… Alright then.
The giant kitty-cat opens up his enormous wet slimy mouth. Lines of saliva drips down from his tongue, and Caratha didn’t hesitate to climb inside the dragon maw. Caratha chirps happily as he lies down on the cat’s tongue. The enormous wet tongue starts licking his face and body all around. Eventually, the Griffin’s head is swallowed down and the fleshy tunnel of the throat is lightly squishing his head. The throat muscles start sucking him down while the dragon continues swallowing…
All is left is his feet and feathery long tail is hanging out from the cat’s lips. He slurped them up like noodles and swallowed with a wet gulp with loud purrs. The bulge in the dragon’s throat slides down and inside, Caratha wriggles himself inside further until he passes through the chest and plopped inside his belly.
Vanilla: Ahh… That was very delicious…
Caratha: Wow, it’s very warm inside your belly.
Vanilla: Thank you. I’m glad that you like it in here.
Vanilla stands up on his four paws, stretches his back, wings and he shown his slightly bloated belly swaying while he walks with his paws. Caratha is rather enjoying the ride while he’s inside the dragon’s belly.
Caratha: So where are you going Mr. Dragon?
Vanilla: You don’t have to call me that, it’s “Vanilla.” What is your name?
Caratha: It’s Caratha.
Vanilla: Well, it is nice to “eat” you Caratha.
Caratha: Likewise.
So Vanilla and Caratha seem to be officially friends now. The large dragon spreads his wings, feathers scatter across the scene like a blizzard, and he descends into the air. Caratha feels the strong movements from the flapping of the cat’s wings.
Caratha: Are we flying?
Vanilla: Yes, I’m just heading over to my cave.
Caratha: Okay.
Vanilla flies into the air and he looks around him while we can see the clouds pass-by the scene. After about 10 minutes, Vanilla eventually landed near the mouth of his cave, and entered inside for some rest. He nuzzles his belly where Caratha is inside.
Vanilla: Hehe, well here we are.
Caratha: Vanilla? Can I see?
Vanilla: I cannot do that.
Caratha: How come?
Vanilla: Well, it’s still morning. You are my breakfast after all, but I will let you out by the next day.
Caratha: Okay. I understand.
Vanilla: *Pushes his belly with a paw* Not to mention, you were quite filling after I swallowed you.
Caratha giggled from the poke and he pushed the walls with his claws and he nuzzled them lightly. Vanilla liked that, he purred like a motor twitching his enormous paws, and showing his adorable expression in front of the camera while he enjoys the rubbing. We go into a overhead shot of the giant white cat exposing his belly as it wriggles within… We eventually fade to black, and it’s been a couple of hours later since playtime with a giant kitty-dragon.
We fade into the same overhead shot with Vanilla and he sighs in relaxation while his belly breathes in and out slowly. The dragon growls with a smile as he looks down at his slightly bloated belly filled with Griffin.
Vanilla: I must say, you can make this kitty very happy. *Pats sloshy belly*
Caratha: Th-thank you.
Vanilla: No, I thank you for the rubbing.
Caratha: *Yawning* Well, I am little sleepy.
Vanilla: I’m not surprised. You have been rubbing inside my belly for almost all day now.
Caratha: Really? How is that possible?
Vanilla: We’ve been having too much fun. I’ll let you out in the morning Caratha.
So with that said, Caratha curled himself into a ball within the fleshy belly filled with saliva and Vanilla laid his paw on his tummy. He yawned showing his enormous maw, closing his eyes, and went to sleep.
In the next morning at 6:30 AM, it is revealed that Caratha is outside the dragon’s belly, lying down on his fluffy side, and sleeping peacefully. Vanilla nuzzles Caratha with his pink nose trying to wake him up.
Caratha: *Moaning*
Vanilla: Good morning sleepyhead.
Caratha: *Opening his eyes* Morning.
Vanilla: How was your sleep?
Caratha: Very good, your tummy is so nice and cozy. I’d love to stay but there are few things that I needed to do right now.
Vanilla: Oh? Can’t stay?
Caratha: Sorry, but at least we are friends right?
Vanilla: Hehe, sure.
Caratha: I’m glad to hear that. Vanilla, can I come back for a visit when I’m done what I need to do?
Vanilla: That’s fine with me. I love visitors coming into my cave, you know.
Caratha: *Nervously* Oh, I think you have your reasons for that…
Vanilla: You can say that.
Caratha: Well… I’ll be back later.
So Caratha stands up on his fours, stretched his wings, and looked back at Vanilla with some glimmer on his eyes. The dragon chuckled at Caratha, and he leaned down on his paws watching as the Griffin leaves the cave, descending to the skies.
We cut from there, Caratha continues flying into the air while we follow him with the camera, and he feels very happy to meet a new friend along his travels from yesterday.
Caratha: *Thoughts* (I’m really glad that I met that cute draggie.)
We fade to a black screen and we go into a close-up shot of a pond. The water surfaces are rippling from the wind, we pan down the camera, and Caratha is starring at the pond with a smile. He is sitting down on his haunches while he enjoys the view so much.
We go into a close-up shot of Caratha as the wind continues to blow across the scene… and he closes his eyes in front of the camera.
Vanilla: *Background* Hey.
Caratha: *Turns around* Oh hello. I didn’t expect you coming here for me.
Vanilla: Yeah, I decided to come visit “you” instead.
Caratha: Well that’s very kind of you.
Caratha climbed up on the dragon’s back and sat on his head. Vanilla didn’t mind that his new friend would be sitting on his fluffy head. He spreads his wings to expose his enormous white fluffy body and he descends up at the sky. The giant kitty-dragon starts flying keeping his wings straight and the view from up here is amazing.
From up here, gravity was like your best friend… Even if you probably fell off of the dragon, he’ll still be there for you to help you out. It was a well-worthy visit for Caratha and probably for Vanilla as well. The mountains are clear, the valleys, people are like ants, the weather conditions is warm, and it is thrilling.
Caratha: Vanilla, mind if I fly with beside you?
Vanilla: Sure thing wittle one.
So with that said, Caratha made sure his wings were spread out before he ascended right beside with Vanilla. Caratha’s flying is a little off-balanced at first but Vanilla made sure he’ll be okay on his own. Eventually, he kept his balance on his own as he glides with his wings, and he flied right beside the huge white dragon…
They’re both playing with each other even at the sky. It’s like two birds are even playing each other while they’re in flight. After about a few hours of playtime with the giant cat, they eventually landed up at the edge of a cliff, and they are rather relaxed. Vanilla is curled up around Caratha and he leans him down against his fluffy breathing belly.
Caratha: Thank you.
Vanilla: It is no problem. I had a lot of fun with you, you know.
Caratha: I’m glad to hear that.
Vanilla: Well, it has been a long day now. There is one more thing you can do for me before we go to sleep.
Caratha: What’s that?
Vanilla: Eat you for supper.
Caratha looked up at the silly big cat as if he seems not surprised at all. After a while of looking at Vanilla in the eye with a close-up shot, he picks up the tasty-looking Griffin like he is a mouse, and opens up his enormous mouth. We go into a maw-shot with the camera showing off his throat, the cat drops the bird in the slobbery wet mouth, and swallowed him whole as usual.
It took a few gulps due to Caratha’s size but it’s enough for the big dragon. His belly has expanded itself and he rubbed it lightly with a paw. It churns, slosh, and groan happily thanks to a nice meal. Meanwhile while inside the belly of a dragon, he playfully wriggles inside back and forth. Vanilla felt that and he almost belched thanks to all of that swaying within his belly. The huge kitty held his his tummy with both of his paws and he couldn’t help but purr.
We can hear the belly breathe in and out and it feels like a very comfy waterbed. The big draggie sways his long tail back and forth as he enjoys the wriggling and writhing so much in his tummy.
Caratha: Awww, you are such a good kitty-cat…
Vanilla: Puurrr, ohhh this feels so good… I just LOVE tummy rubs…
Caratha: I’m happy to hear that. Well, we should get some sleep now.
Vanilla: I think I will agree to that. *Caresses his tummy*
After such a nice tasty meal, we go into a internal shot with Caratha inside the belly. He feels very tired, every single string of saliva on his body is making him sleepy, and the stomach walls are pushing his body. We end this story with a close-up shot of Caratha’s eyes as they close and he drifted off into his dreams.
FIN
Commissioned by:
hagraya
NOTES: This is a commission for hagraya. This’ll be another “paid” long story similar to the one that I’ve done in the previous commission. For those who stumble here randomly, please read the title carefully. This contains vore and if added a negative comment, you will be blocked without a warning. Thank you and I hope you enjoy.
We begin the story in a overhead shot of a Griffin-like creature roaming across the woods alone. His name is “Caratha,” and he is on a search for a predatory friend. He has orange, a long feathery-like tail, eagle claws on his forearms, hind-legs, long wings, sharp-edged beak, sharp eyes, and some red on his body including the edges of his wings and tail. The weather condition is sunny but the trees are blocking the sunlight. We follow Caratha with the camera as he wonders around alone. The wind is blowing a little, birds are chirping, and the bushes rustle a little from the wind.
Caratha: *Thoughts* (Hmm… Not a single pred in sight. I could’ve sworn that I was going the right way.)
Caratha continues his quest for a friend until he stumbles himself into a steep rocky hill. The camera follows him after he fell, he tossed and turned while rolling down the hill and he couldn’t use his wings due to being rolled around so much…
Meanwhile, we cut from there and we go to a close-up shot of a white sleeping dragon snoring away. He is lying down on his back, breathing belly is exposed, and feathery-like wings are flat on the ground. He is napping near at the same hill where Caratha is rolling down. In the background of this picture, we see a line of dust coming down towards the sleeping dragon. Eventually, Caratha accidentally landed right ontop of Vanilla’s belly and he bounced on it like it was a trampoline. The white dragon awakens from his slumberland and Caratha is spooked a little.
Vanilla: Well, well, a juicy bird landed on my tummy as I can see?
Caratha: Oh uh… *Scratches head* Th-thanks Mr. Dragon.
Vanilla: What is a wittle one like you doing here?
Caratha: Well, as you can see, I was wondering around in the woods looking for a new friend. Are you a good dragon?
Vanilla: *Giggle* You are looking at one right now.
Caratha: I’m glad to hear that. You seem like a good dragon.
Vanilla: Hehe, why not come a little closer and find out yourself?
Vanilla has says this with a smile trying to feel like he’s an innocent kitty-dragon… Caratha climbs up the chest of the large furry beast and the wind blows across the scene. It’s very quiet between the two of them. Caratha smiles up at the white beast after he is close to his muzzle.
Caratha: Umm… Can I ask you something Mr. Dragon?
Vanilla: Yes?
Caratha: I know this may be out of the blue but, can you eat me?
Vanilla: Hmmm… I suppose I can have a Griffin for breakfast.
Caratha: I would be happy about that!
Vanilla: Hehe… Alright then.
The giant kitty-cat opens up his enormous wet slimy mouth. Lines of saliva drips down from his tongue, and Caratha didn’t hesitate to climb inside the dragon maw. Caratha chirps happily as he lies down on the cat’s tongue. The enormous wet tongue starts licking his face and body all around. Eventually, the Griffin’s head is swallowed down and the fleshy tunnel of the throat is lightly squishing his head. The throat muscles start sucking him down while the dragon continues swallowing…
All is left is his feet and feathery long tail is hanging out from the cat’s lips. He slurped them up like noodles and swallowed with a wet gulp with loud purrs. The bulge in the dragon’s throat slides down and inside, Caratha wriggles himself inside further until he passes through the chest and plopped inside his belly.
Vanilla: Ahh… That was very delicious…
Caratha: Wow, it’s very warm inside your belly.
Vanilla: Thank you. I’m glad that you like it in here.
Vanilla stands up on his four paws, stretches his back, wings and he shown his slightly bloated belly swaying while he walks with his paws. Caratha is rather enjoying the ride while he’s inside the dragon’s belly.
Caratha: So where are you going Mr. Dragon?
Vanilla: You don’t have to call me that, it’s “Vanilla.” What is your name?
Caratha: It’s Caratha.
Vanilla: Well, it is nice to “eat” you Caratha.
Caratha: Likewise.
So Vanilla and Caratha seem to be officially friends now. The large dragon spreads his wings, feathers scatter across the scene like a blizzard, and he descends into the air. Caratha feels the strong movements from the flapping of the cat’s wings.
Caratha: Are we flying?
Vanilla: Yes, I’m just heading over to my cave.
Caratha: Okay.
Vanilla flies into the air and he looks around him while we can see the clouds pass-by the scene. After about 10 minutes, Vanilla eventually landed near the mouth of his cave, and entered inside for some rest. He nuzzles his belly where Caratha is inside.
Vanilla: Hehe, well here we are.
Caratha: Vanilla? Can I see?
Vanilla: I cannot do that.
Caratha: How come?
Vanilla: Well, it’s still morning. You are my breakfast after all, but I will let you out by the next day.
Caratha: Okay. I understand.
Vanilla: *Pushes his belly with a paw* Not to mention, you were quite filling after I swallowed you.
Caratha giggled from the poke and he pushed the walls with his claws and he nuzzled them lightly. Vanilla liked that, he purred like a motor twitching his enormous paws, and showing his adorable expression in front of the camera while he enjoys the rubbing. We go into a overhead shot of the giant white cat exposing his belly as it wriggles within… We eventually fade to black, and it’s been a couple of hours later since playtime with a giant kitty-dragon.
We fade into the same overhead shot with Vanilla and he sighs in relaxation while his belly breathes in and out slowly. The dragon growls with a smile as he looks down at his slightly bloated belly filled with Griffin.
Vanilla: I must say, you can make this kitty very happy. *Pats sloshy belly*
Caratha: Th-thank you.
Vanilla: No, I thank you for the rubbing.
Caratha: *Yawning* Well, I am little sleepy.
Vanilla: I’m not surprised. You have been rubbing inside my belly for almost all day now.
Caratha: Really? How is that possible?
Vanilla: We’ve been having too much fun. I’ll let you out in the morning Caratha.
So with that said, Caratha curled himself into a ball within the fleshy belly filled with saliva and Vanilla laid his paw on his tummy. He yawned showing his enormous maw, closing his eyes, and went to sleep.
In the next morning at 6:30 AM, it is revealed that Caratha is outside the dragon’s belly, lying down on his fluffy side, and sleeping peacefully. Vanilla nuzzles Caratha with his pink nose trying to wake him up.
Caratha: *Moaning*
Vanilla: Good morning sleepyhead.
Caratha: *Opening his eyes* Morning.
Vanilla: How was your sleep?
Caratha: Very good, your tummy is so nice and cozy. I’d love to stay but there are few things that I needed to do right now.
Vanilla: Oh? Can’t stay?
Caratha: Sorry, but at least we are friends right?
Vanilla: Hehe, sure.
Caratha: I’m glad to hear that. Vanilla, can I come back for a visit when I’m done what I need to do?
Vanilla: That’s fine with me. I love visitors coming into my cave, you know.
Caratha: *Nervously* Oh, I think you have your reasons for that…
Vanilla: You can say that.
Caratha: Well… I’ll be back later.
So Caratha stands up on his fours, stretched his wings, and looked back at Vanilla with some glimmer on his eyes. The dragon chuckled at Caratha, and he leaned down on his paws watching as the Griffin leaves the cave, descending to the skies.
We cut from there, Caratha continues flying into the air while we follow him with the camera, and he feels very happy to meet a new friend along his travels from yesterday.
Caratha: *Thoughts* (I’m really glad that I met that cute draggie.)
We fade to a black screen and we go into a close-up shot of a pond. The water surfaces are rippling from the wind, we pan down the camera, and Caratha is starring at the pond with a smile. He is sitting down on his haunches while he enjoys the view so much.
We go into a close-up shot of Caratha as the wind continues to blow across the scene… and he closes his eyes in front of the camera.
Vanilla: *Background* Hey.
Caratha: *Turns around* Oh hello. I didn’t expect you coming here for me.
Vanilla: Yeah, I decided to come visit “you” instead.
Caratha: Well that’s very kind of you.
Caratha climbed up on the dragon’s back and sat on his head. Vanilla didn’t mind that his new friend would be sitting on his fluffy head. He spreads his wings to expose his enormous white fluffy body and he descends up at the sky. The giant kitty-dragon starts flying keeping his wings straight and the view from up here is amazing.
From up here, gravity was like your best friend… Even if you probably fell off of the dragon, he’ll still be there for you to help you out. It was a well-worthy visit for Caratha and probably for Vanilla as well. The mountains are clear, the valleys, people are like ants, the weather conditions is warm, and it is thrilling.
Caratha: Vanilla, mind if I fly with beside you?
Vanilla: Sure thing wittle one.
So with that said, Caratha made sure his wings were spread out before he ascended right beside with Vanilla. Caratha’s flying is a little off-balanced at first but Vanilla made sure he’ll be okay on his own. Eventually, he kept his balance on his own as he glides with his wings, and he flied right beside the huge white dragon…
They’re both playing with each other even at the sky. It’s like two birds are even playing each other while they’re in flight. After about a few hours of playtime with the giant cat, they eventually landed up at the edge of a cliff, and they are rather relaxed. Vanilla is curled up around Caratha and he leans him down against his fluffy breathing belly.
Caratha: Thank you.
Vanilla: It is no problem. I had a lot of fun with you, you know.
Caratha: I’m glad to hear that.
Vanilla: Well, it has been a long day now. There is one more thing you can do for me before we go to sleep.
Caratha: What’s that?
Vanilla: Eat you for supper.
Caratha looked up at the silly big cat as if he seems not surprised at all. After a while of looking at Vanilla in the eye with a close-up shot, he picks up the tasty-looking Griffin like he is a mouse, and opens up his enormous mouth. We go into a maw-shot with the camera showing off his throat, the cat drops the bird in the slobbery wet mouth, and swallowed him whole as usual.
It took a few gulps due to Caratha’s size but it’s enough for the big dragon. His belly has expanded itself and he rubbed it lightly with a paw. It churns, slosh, and groan happily thanks to a nice meal. Meanwhile while inside the belly of a dragon, he playfully wriggles inside back and forth. Vanilla felt that and he almost belched thanks to all of that swaying within his belly. The huge kitty held his his tummy with both of his paws and he couldn’t help but purr.
We can hear the belly breathe in and out and it feels like a very comfy waterbed. The big draggie sways his long tail back and forth as he enjoys the wriggling and writhing so much in his tummy.
Caratha: Awww, you are such a good kitty-cat…
Vanilla: Puurrr, ohhh this feels so good… I just LOVE tummy rubs…
Caratha: I’m happy to hear that. Well, we should get some sleep now.
Vanilla: I think I will agree to that. *Caresses his tummy*
After such a nice tasty meal, we go into a internal shot with Caratha inside the belly. He feels very tired, every single string of saliva on his body is making him sleepy, and the stomach walls are pushing his body. We end this story with a close-up shot of Caratha’s eyes as they close and he drifted off into his dreams.
FIN
Commissioned by:
hagraya
Category Story / Vore
Species Eastern Dragon
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 497.3 kB
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