Kingman vs. Talkhan the Forest Dragon. Part 1 of 2.
Long story short I was yapping to
rahlaeya and
dragon_Of_twilight about my luck with dragons. This story tells why. Kingman is sent to investigate a Romanian village where an operative is apparently munched by a huge Forest Dragon, and it all goes down hill fast for the Inquisitor. If ya'll like this story I'll bring more quirky tales ranging from out and out FUMOFFU-esque comedy, to pure action and drama. (The good kind of drama.)
rahlaeya and
dragon_Of_twilight about my luck with dragons. This story tells why. Kingman is sent to investigate a Romanian village where an operative is apparently munched by a huge Forest Dragon, and it all goes down hill fast for the Inquisitor. If ya'll like this story I'll bring more quirky tales ranging from out and out FUMOFFU-esque comedy, to pure action and drama. (The good kind of drama.)
Category Story / All
Species Housecat
Size 120 x 93px
File Size 65.5 kB
mainly i find miss-used words..... the names on the other hand are fine. some times there is fragments. but other then that is good..... (take no offense, especially from me... im a horrid writer but really good at spell check and grammar) (i found at least 10 errors in the first page of one of the novels i started to read. and the Eragon series also has errors... pretty funny if you ask me)
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