Soo this is what my sketches look like when I try to leave my comfort zone xD

I wanted to do a bad ass piece of my dear Golgaritian Knight, but I can't get it right somehow.


Help me with some red lines, maybe? xD
'(And I mean visual help, writing something like 'the hand looks wrong!' doesn't help. )


If you want to know more about the character and what I am going for -take a look here http://yako.deviantart.com/gallery/?catpath=%2F&q=Siona

Thanks in advance!