That face looks like maybe he eats anime nerds for breakfast, so maybe he shouldn't be on Free. :P Or at least I can't tell if he looks focused or predatory. :O

Thank you for working on this! The sketchy outlines around him are an interesting touch. They both convey movement and your drawing process, and also add a unique stylistic edge to the piece.

(And not to nitpick but I think you forgot his tailfins)

XD actually yeah I did forget now that ya remind me, i'll fix that] but im glad ya like em

fixed, sorry bout the wait