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I guess the question is, what *aren't* we seeing in panel 5?
http://zuzelandthefox.com/comic/a-memory/
I guess the question is, what *aren't* we seeing in panel 5?
http://zuzelandthefox.com/comic/a-memory/
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
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Really good as always !
If i may do some lil criticism: i think the blue used on rudek's uniform combined with olive green lines is too different than the other colors used on this palette and it looks odd.
And even though, as someone mentionned up there that his pose on the 4th pannel match really well with the 6th one and does a great job at connecting these too, his pose looks strange. I think it has been done pourposely to show the chock going on in poor rudek flashbacking but the whole body looks flat whereas all the other poses on the comics have a great hum... notion of movement or pose. ith ink to have only his head look like this would have been more than enough to create an odd feeling and un comfortable, even with a more... dynamic pose " like to make a connection with the previous panels like his arm almost achieving to go down after puting back his cigarette.
how to formulate... this pose in a standalone looks really goog it just take too much attention in the comics by being that different of the other ones.
it's a lot of words for a small thing, meh.
I really enjoy how you mix fully painted nbackground and lineart's parts ! The expressions are really good and i do likke the effort to make this flash back look like an old photgraph-ish from this period.
Plus really good graphical transition work with the cart between 2nd and 3rd pannel ! :D
And... tough topic...
If i may do some lil criticism: i think the blue used on rudek's uniform combined with olive green lines is too different than the other colors used on this palette and it looks odd.
And even though, as someone mentionned up there that his pose on the 4th pannel match really well with the 6th one and does a great job at connecting these too, his pose looks strange. I think it has been done pourposely to show the chock going on in poor rudek flashbacking but the whole body looks flat whereas all the other poses on the comics have a great hum... notion of movement or pose. ith ink to have only his head look like this would have been more than enough to create an odd feeling and un comfortable, even with a more... dynamic pose " like to make a connection with the previous panels like his arm almost achieving to go down after puting back his cigarette.
how to formulate... this pose in a standalone looks really goog it just take too much attention in the comics by being that different of the other ones.
it's a lot of words for a small thing, meh.
I really enjoy how you mix fully painted nbackground and lineart's parts ! The expressions are really good and i do likke the effort to make this flash back look like an old photgraph-ish from this period.
Plus really good graphical transition work with the cart between 2nd and 3rd pannel ! :D
And... tough topic...
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