Finally coming back with these two, once again on the beach. Now as usual there are some mistakes. But at least I learned how to design male abs better because of it. And now the story can continue.
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A couple days after ridding with Nicholas on his bike Topaz returned to the beach but this time with only a few of the Jewel Vixens. This was because ones like Sapphire had other things to do. But Ruby, Jade, and Amethyst had been able to come. The blond hair vixen had her surf board this time because she didn't want to get rusty on her surfing skills.
"Quite a nice day to be out," commented Amethyst.
"A shame the others can't join us," stated Jade.
"But we can still, like, have fun!" said Topaz with a huge grin.
The four found a spot to set up their stuff. When that was finished, they went their separate ways. Topaz went out to the water while Jade decided to walk along the beach and tease a few males in the process. Ruby and Amethyst got some tanning in instead.
A couple of hours latter it was lunch time and the four got the food out. Topaz kept stealing glances around the beach, hoping that maybe Nicholas would show up.
"What's wrong with ya Topaz?" asked Ruby. "You're as jumpy as a horse getting shoes on."
"Oh, I'm like fine," answered the blond vixen and little too quickly.
"I think you're hoping somebody will show up," said Jade with a teasing grin. "Maybe that guy you've been hanging out with as of late?"
The poor vixen blushed hard. But before she could respond, they all heard a voice. "Well hey there Topaz!" The four vixens looked up to see Nicholas. The vulpine was carrying water skies over his shoulder.
"Nicholas!" she exclaimed happily and jumped up to give him a hug. The others just watched. Now that they could see him up close, what they had seen before got even more intensified.
"Hey there," whispered the vulpine in Topaz's ear. The two pulled back and could remember what had happened last time, causing them to blush slightly. "So uh, mind if I join you and your friends?" Nicholas had seen the other three with the vixen he liked.
"Oh sure!" answered Topaz. The two walked over. The male fox was able to recognize the other Jewel Vixens. "This is Jade, Amethyst, and Ruby."
"Well howdy mam," went Nicholas to the red hair vixen and with his right paw pretend to greet with a cowboy hat in a perfect southern accent. It caused the older fox to giggle. The vulpine then bowed in a Japanese like getting to Jade. This caught the 19 year old vixen off guard since she didn't think he would. But it was still nice.
"It's a pleasure to meet all of you," he said before shaking paws with Amethyst.
"Nice to meet you as well," responded the purple hair vixen. He then took a seat next to Topaz after putting his skies next to her board.
"So how did you meet Topaz?" asked Jade while sitting on her elbows. The black furred vixen was a bit torn on the inside. Although she want her friend to be happy, this guy seemed like the perfect one to tease and flirt with. For now, this would do.
"Right to the point huh?" he went. "Funny you should mention that." The vulpine told of that day on the beach and how he and the vixen had met.
"Well ain't that cute?" commented Ruby with a grin. Topaz covered her face with her paws.
"You're like embarrassing me!" she stated. Nicholas then noticed the surf board.
"Is that yours?" he asked the blond hair vixen. She gave a swift nod. "Well then maybe after eating you could show me what you can do on that." The five began to eat. There was enough for everyone. Originally Emerald was going to come, but at the last second had canceled. Ruby decided to bring the extra food just in case.
The group talked as they ate. It was about what they liked to do. Topaz and Nicholas learned a bit more about each other. Of course nothing was talked about what the careers were or their pasts. After eating, they had to wait for the food to digest.
"Well that should be enough," said Nicholas and got up with a stretch. "Shall we get in the water Topaz?"
"Oh yes!" she responded. They got the water skies and board and made their way to the water. The others followed.
"How about I go first?" asked the vulpine. Topaz just nodded. Nicholas found a guy who he had already paid for to do this. After getting hooked up, the male showed the blond vixen his ability to water ski. He wasn't the best at it, but it was something Topaz didn't know how to do. Nicholas was out on the water for ten minutes before he came back and she was the one who clapped at his performance. The vulpine put on a bow.
"Now then, it's your turn." Topaz grabbed her board and made her way out.
"I heard she is one of the best in this area," commented Nicholas.
"You heard right," said Amethyst. "We've seen it for ourselves." Jade in the meantime was standing next to the vulpine and fighting inside herself not to do anything. Suddenly her tail flicked his. It caused Nicholas to turn and look at her funny.
"What are you doing Jade?"
"Oh nothing," she answered, covering up her mistake. The vixen shot him a dazzling grin.
"If you say so," went Nicholas and turned his attention back to Topaz. He had been unaffected by her charm. It left Jade shocked. No male had ever been able to resist her. At least the ones who were single. She saw the smile he had on his face and the look in his eyes as he saw Topaz surf. Could it be that he...?
The vixen then came in after a bit. "So like how was that?"
"You certainly live up to your reputation," commented Nicholas, causing her to blush slightly. That was all Jade needed to figure it out. But she would keep quite. They spent the rest of the time talking and hanging out. At one point Ruby took a picture of the two together with the surf board and skies next to them. The other three thought the two were such a cute couple. They also couldn't help but notice that Nicholas had the looks to be a model. But when they asked him about maybe being one, the vulpine just shrugged off the idea politely.
"This has been a lot of fun. You know, I would very much like to meet the other Jewel Vixens." This caught the four's attention.
"Hold on, why would you want to do that?" asked Amethyst. "It's just for obvious reasons..."
"It's not like that. I want to meet them because after meeting you I feel that it's only fair I do so with the others. Besides all of you seem nice enough so the others should be as well. Think about it. If I keep meeting Topaz like this sooner or latter I will run into them. So what better time than now? I know where you live thanks to Topaz since I had to pick her up that one time. So I could meet the rest there."
The four went silent as they thought about his offer. Topaz remembered what she had promised Sapphire. And the others weren't so sure this would be the best idea even though Nicholas had a point.
"You don't have to say yes now," said the vulpine. "You can have a week to think it over. Then Topaz can call me to let me know. How does that sound?"
"Very well," responded Amethyst.
"In any case I need to get going. I look forward to what you have to say. And Topaz?" She looked into his eyes. "I'll definitely see you around." Nicholas grabbed his skies and left with a wave to her. The blond vixen waved goodbye back with a smile on her face.
"Topaz..." said Jade and the said female turned to her. "You... have a boyfriend?"
"What?!" Her face went scarlet, and she tried to hide it, but with no luck at all. "Nicholas is just a friend!"
"Awfully close to be just a friend, don't you think?" asked the black furred vine with a teasing grin. "Oh I'm so happy for you!"
"He is not my boyfriend!" shouted Topaz. The other two females just had grins on their faces.
Meanwhile Nicholas reached a payphone and called a number. "Yes... it's me. It seems things are going smoothly. I told them about my idea to meet them. If all goes well things will be moving in the right direction. If they say yes, you will be seeing them soon." He then hung up and left the beach.
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That's all for now. All credit for Topaz and the other Jewel Vixens goes to: http://www.furaffinity.net/user/aelius/
Previous: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/15491821/
Next: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/15743554/
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A couple days after ridding with Nicholas on his bike Topaz returned to the beach but this time with only a few of the Jewel Vixens. This was because ones like Sapphire had other things to do. But Ruby, Jade, and Amethyst had been able to come. The blond hair vixen had her surf board this time because she didn't want to get rusty on her surfing skills.
"Quite a nice day to be out," commented Amethyst.
"A shame the others can't join us," stated Jade.
"But we can still, like, have fun!" said Topaz with a huge grin.
The four found a spot to set up their stuff. When that was finished, they went their separate ways. Topaz went out to the water while Jade decided to walk along the beach and tease a few males in the process. Ruby and Amethyst got some tanning in instead.
A couple of hours latter it was lunch time and the four got the food out. Topaz kept stealing glances around the beach, hoping that maybe Nicholas would show up.
"What's wrong with ya Topaz?" asked Ruby. "You're as jumpy as a horse getting shoes on."
"Oh, I'm like fine," answered the blond vixen and little too quickly.
"I think you're hoping somebody will show up," said Jade with a teasing grin. "Maybe that guy you've been hanging out with as of late?"
The poor vixen blushed hard. But before she could respond, they all heard a voice. "Well hey there Topaz!" The four vixens looked up to see Nicholas. The vulpine was carrying water skies over his shoulder.
"Nicholas!" she exclaimed happily and jumped up to give him a hug. The others just watched. Now that they could see him up close, what they had seen before got even more intensified.
"Hey there," whispered the vulpine in Topaz's ear. The two pulled back and could remember what had happened last time, causing them to blush slightly. "So uh, mind if I join you and your friends?" Nicholas had seen the other three with the vixen he liked.
"Oh sure!" answered Topaz. The two walked over. The male fox was able to recognize the other Jewel Vixens. "This is Jade, Amethyst, and Ruby."
"Well howdy mam," went Nicholas to the red hair vixen and with his right paw pretend to greet with a cowboy hat in a perfect southern accent. It caused the older fox to giggle. The vulpine then bowed in a Japanese like getting to Jade. This caught the 19 year old vixen off guard since she didn't think he would. But it was still nice.
"It's a pleasure to meet all of you," he said before shaking paws with Amethyst.
"Nice to meet you as well," responded the purple hair vixen. He then took a seat next to Topaz after putting his skies next to her board.
"So how did you meet Topaz?" asked Jade while sitting on her elbows. The black furred vixen was a bit torn on the inside. Although she want her friend to be happy, this guy seemed like the perfect one to tease and flirt with. For now, this would do.
"Right to the point huh?" he went. "Funny you should mention that." The vulpine told of that day on the beach and how he and the vixen had met.
"Well ain't that cute?" commented Ruby with a grin. Topaz covered her face with her paws.
"You're like embarrassing me!" she stated. Nicholas then noticed the surf board.
"Is that yours?" he asked the blond hair vixen. She gave a swift nod. "Well then maybe after eating you could show me what you can do on that." The five began to eat. There was enough for everyone. Originally Emerald was going to come, but at the last second had canceled. Ruby decided to bring the extra food just in case.
The group talked as they ate. It was about what they liked to do. Topaz and Nicholas learned a bit more about each other. Of course nothing was talked about what the careers were or their pasts. After eating, they had to wait for the food to digest.
"Well that should be enough," said Nicholas and got up with a stretch. "Shall we get in the water Topaz?"
"Oh yes!" she responded. They got the water skies and board and made their way to the water. The others followed.
"How about I go first?" asked the vulpine. Topaz just nodded. Nicholas found a guy who he had already paid for to do this. After getting hooked up, the male showed the blond vixen his ability to water ski. He wasn't the best at it, but it was something Topaz didn't know how to do. Nicholas was out on the water for ten minutes before he came back and she was the one who clapped at his performance. The vulpine put on a bow.
"Now then, it's your turn." Topaz grabbed her board and made her way out.
"I heard she is one of the best in this area," commented Nicholas.
"You heard right," said Amethyst. "We've seen it for ourselves." Jade in the meantime was standing next to the vulpine and fighting inside herself not to do anything. Suddenly her tail flicked his. It caused Nicholas to turn and look at her funny.
"What are you doing Jade?"
"Oh nothing," she answered, covering up her mistake. The vixen shot him a dazzling grin.
"If you say so," went Nicholas and turned his attention back to Topaz. He had been unaffected by her charm. It left Jade shocked. No male had ever been able to resist her. At least the ones who were single. She saw the smile he had on his face and the look in his eyes as he saw Topaz surf. Could it be that he...?
The vixen then came in after a bit. "So like how was that?"
"You certainly live up to your reputation," commented Nicholas, causing her to blush slightly. That was all Jade needed to figure it out. But she would keep quite. They spent the rest of the time talking and hanging out. At one point Ruby took a picture of the two together with the surf board and skies next to them. The other three thought the two were such a cute couple. They also couldn't help but notice that Nicholas had the looks to be a model. But when they asked him about maybe being one, the vulpine just shrugged off the idea politely.
"This has been a lot of fun. You know, I would very much like to meet the other Jewel Vixens." This caught the four's attention.
"Hold on, why would you want to do that?" asked Amethyst. "It's just for obvious reasons..."
"It's not like that. I want to meet them because after meeting you I feel that it's only fair I do so with the others. Besides all of you seem nice enough so the others should be as well. Think about it. If I keep meeting Topaz like this sooner or latter I will run into them. So what better time than now? I know where you live thanks to Topaz since I had to pick her up that one time. So I could meet the rest there."
The four went silent as they thought about his offer. Topaz remembered what she had promised Sapphire. And the others weren't so sure this would be the best idea even though Nicholas had a point.
"You don't have to say yes now," said the vulpine. "You can have a week to think it over. Then Topaz can call me to let me know. How does that sound?"
"Very well," responded Amethyst.
"In any case I need to get going. I look forward to what you have to say. And Topaz?" She looked into his eyes. "I'll definitely see you around." Nicholas grabbed his skies and left with a wave to her. The blond vixen waved goodbye back with a smile on her face.
"Topaz..." said Jade and the said female turned to her. "You... have a boyfriend?"
"What?!" Her face went scarlet, and she tried to hide it, but with no luck at all. "Nicholas is just a friend!"
"Awfully close to be just a friend, don't you think?" asked the black furred vine with a teasing grin. "Oh I'm so happy for you!"
"He is not my boyfriend!" shouted Topaz. The other two females just had grins on their faces.
Meanwhile Nicholas reached a payphone and called a number. "Yes... it's me. It seems things are going smoothly. I told them about my idea to meet them. If all goes well things will be moving in the right direction. If they say yes, you will be seeing them soon." He then hung up and left the beach.
X
That's all for now. All credit for Topaz and the other Jewel Vixens goes to: http://www.furaffinity.net/user/aelius/
Previous: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/15491821/
Next: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/15743554/
Category Artwork (Traditional) / General Furry Art
Species Vulpine (Other)
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Indeed. Now here's a question I have. Will Topaz's parents ever appear in the comic you have plained? And if not, what are they're names, does Topaz have a last name, what do they look like, and what did Topaz inherit from each? My guess she got most of her personality and looks from her mother.
Far as I can remember, there are no specific plans to feature them, though that may change in the future if the comic continues.
As for their names, I think her father will be named Jacob and her mother Madison (the names aren't set in stone yet, but you're free to use them if they're featured). Topaz inherited a mix between her parents for her looks. Fur and hair color come from her father, while eyes, body shape, and athleticism come from her mother. Her personality has aspects of both.
As for their names, I think her father will be named Jacob and her mother Madison (the names aren't set in stone yet, but you're free to use them if they're featured). Topaz inherited a mix between her parents for her looks. Fur and hair color come from her father, while eyes, body shape, and athleticism come from her mother. Her personality has aspects of both.
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