awesome *-* It beggars description

it beggars?

sry not in a bad way ^^" my english is not the best XD

I say awesome and fav X3

oh, heh, english is not my first language either, it's ok!

Can you speak german *-*

Mano, wieso nicht gleich! Da bin ich aber platt, gerade meine zweite Fremdsprache, hey

JEAH *-* boah das was du gemacht ist so geil XDDDD bin ich bescheuert villeicht sollte ich erst fragen dann reden XDDD

Danke, und nein bist du nicht, jeden Comment mit "do you speak german" anzufangen ware ja auch ziemlich shrag

Stimmt XDDD naja mit wem spielst du eigentlich Musol Yanii zusammen X3 ich nehm immer ventus und Musol

es gibt viele (nicht Haupt) Charaktere die ich IMMER nehne
Musol Yanii
Saphire
Grace
Silver Girl
Tiffon
Joseph
Mordeus
Norff
Edel
Henri
Rebecca

wow, you did a lot better then the artist who originally did that character, Kudos to the fine job you did.

Thanks, but really/ Better than the original"?

yes, in my opinion, I think its by a long shot better.

ah wait, which is left, ah well, still its really good, I must have mistaken your right with my left, but still, I think its not bad :D

ah nevermind I was right all along, the one I thought was yours was yours ^V^

left: his
middle&right: mine

It doesn't look like the original at all, painting wise. I will help you though.

First, notice the blockiness of the colors of the original, compared to your very soft blending. Second, notice the contrast created with the light on the original compared to your non-lighted version. Lastly, pay attention to the subtle addition of blues all over the original.

You did a good base for the colors, though. Right now your style is timid and you would benefit from being bolder.

Don't give up! I am working on this sort of thing too. ;A;

Thank you (sorry, I really didn't reply because I was trying to analyze what you wrote, but now I get it.

I do realize that it doesn't look the same, different coloring style, true.

But I am truly curious, what do you mean with "being bolder"? I am truly curious!

Sorry for my late reply. What I mean specifically is looking at the white for more exaggerated highlights on the original and the lack on yours, as well as the more darker darks on the original whereas yours is a lot of midtones. The most recent one you did is already much better than the older attempt, but if you notice also the paint style on the original is more streaky (the hands, arms, etc) and there's bits of blue on places (the leg, hand) to liven the colors up a bit.

I also apologize cause I just realized this was submitted 2 years ago.

Yeah your right, guess more diversity is good , althought the "completly different color" thing still confuses me.

Ahh noo! No harm done at all! I am VERY thankful to you for this help :)

I'm trying to improve my coloring style, it's nice to hear that I have indeed improved. But I guess I still have a bit of a long road ahead anyways.

I don't know where you got the "completely different color" thing from cause that wasn't in my original comment. I actually said your color base is pretty spot on when I said "You did a good base for the colors".

No no no no!
I meant... your...
and there's bits of blue on places (the leg, hand) to liven the colors up a bit.

That is the "completely different color" thing I was referring to.

If you don't see the blues on your own then there's not much I can do to help you a this point.

No no no no!! Listen! I see the blue color and I know exactly what you mean.

I just still cannot make myself use it everytime.... I don't think I've "tamed it" yet, but I got to do that myself.

I remember that game.....Unlimited Saga....horrible game, though XD. But I played it just for that character XD

I liked it, had many elements that I wish more games had... although a share of bitter stuff too.