After the Prolog i decided to do a little flashback for the Crew.
So here is a little writing about things that happend before they all where gatherd as a group.
PS not all my charakters are in the Group yet and will follow later.
So here is a little writing about things that happend before they all where gatherd as a group.
PS not all my charakters are in the Group yet and will follow later.
Category Story / General Furry Art
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 103 x 120px
File Size 6.8 kB
I like the first part, where Drakon found finally his sister after several years of absence. Intense moment when Drakon awakes his sister.
Good transition with the flashback.
For the second part: Subtle presentation of the Red Hazards team.
And for the end: It is a good massacre of monsters lol
Globally you made a good story. Good job.
Good transition with the flashback.
For the second part: Subtle presentation of the Red Hazards team.
And for the end: It is a good massacre of monsters lol
Globally you made a good story. Good job.
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