hey hey cubs.this is an old sketch i've found on my folders and decided to finish it work, to have less wip pics there...

it's absed on a story i've though in awhile.

Gus is the captain of a military spaceship that has to fly through the universe, find lifeless planets and use them as military bases.

But one day he spots a planet that is located in a good area for a strategy, but seeing there's some life there, he decide to leave it in peace.

But this decision made the second in charge really annoyed, and he decides to get on control of the operation.

He tricks Gus in a chamber,where he'll get regressed. Once regressed, he'll be sent to the same planet he decided to don't "conquer".

There, he won't be older than 4yo, but the regression procedure made him loose some abilities and coordination. And that planet doesn't speak Gus's language, so it'll be a bit more complicated to explain what happened, or who he is, or why he's there.

I was still working on the details of this story, when i lost interest for it. Then looking at some pics, i've found this.

The general there is a random fur, who lost his arm and part of his face during a previous operation, so it can add some hate on him for the captain Gus.

What you think about the story? and the comic?

note: this is the beggining of the story, before this pic: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10252416/