Pythonic Portraiture - by Amaranth, Text by Amethystine
Art, of course, by the intriguing, intense, incomparable,
AmaDenchArt!
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Amaranth was trying out a new technique for doing scales, and this happened. @___@ *______________*
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I'm not sure what I can say about this beautiful bust of Amethystine, aside from gushing ad nauseum about its quiet, dignified perfection. But then I wouldn't seem as refined or as stately as this utterly classy art portrays me to be.
This reminds me, in fact, of something Ama told me some time ago and has repeated once or twice in the last few years. It was something about how she perceived me when she and I first encountered one another, here on FA, and she revealed it after we had gotten to know one another much better.
She said that I had seemed 'erudite' (and perhaps she had also said 'enigmatic', but that's probably just something I wish I had been called, because it's a cool word and it goes with my tendency to try to list qualitative words with the same first letter, as much as possible), and proper, and that she remembered wanting to live up to what she imagined my expectations would be, of her, or of people in general.
This work of art, more than any other I've received from her or anyone else, embodies that perception of Amethystine. The art of others, and Ama's art especially, has always made me and my character greater than we really are, elevated us, made me want to live up to the art and the reputation and the appearance and the perception; be it how I act or talk, or what I write or how I write it.
Being seen as something better than you are, and knowing you are thusly seen, it can motivate one toward self-improvement. Many people have enacted this impulse within me, but none more than Amaranth.
Knowing Ama has made me want to be a better person.. a better snake.. and a better snakeperson. :}===<3
Put simply: 'My Maiden Motivates Me'
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How To Snake
~
A serpentine,
To be quite fine,
must abide these lines:
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Cunning constrictor: clear cut & clean
Reptilian rapture: captured, refined
Intense inhumanity integrated in intellect, keen
Sublimely scale-skinned: smooth & streamlined
Proud, proper python: polished, pristine
.
AmaDenchArt!~~~
Amaranth was trying out a new technique for doing scales, and this happened. @___@ *______________*
-
I'm not sure what I can say about this beautiful bust of Amethystine, aside from gushing ad nauseum about its quiet, dignified perfection. But then I wouldn't seem as refined or as stately as this utterly classy art portrays me to be.
This reminds me, in fact, of something Ama told me some time ago and has repeated once or twice in the last few years. It was something about how she perceived me when she and I first encountered one another, here on FA, and she revealed it after we had gotten to know one another much better.
She said that I had seemed 'erudite' (and perhaps she had also said 'enigmatic', but that's probably just something I wish I had been called, because it's a cool word and it goes with my tendency to try to list qualitative words with the same first letter, as much as possible), and proper, and that she remembered wanting to live up to what she imagined my expectations would be, of her, or of people in general.
This work of art, more than any other I've received from her or anyone else, embodies that perception of Amethystine. The art of others, and Ama's art especially, has always made me and my character greater than we really are, elevated us, made me want to live up to the art and the reputation and the appearance and the perception; be it how I act or talk, or what I write or how I write it.
Being seen as something better than you are, and knowing you are thusly seen, it can motivate one toward self-improvement. Many people have enacted this impulse within me, but none more than Amaranth.
Knowing Ama has made me want to be a better person.. a better snake.. and a better snakeperson. :}===<3
Put simply: 'My Maiden Motivates Me'
~~~
How To Snake
~
A serpentine,
To be quite fine,
must abide these lines:
-
Cunning constrictor: clear cut & clean
Reptilian rapture: captured, refined
Intense inhumanity integrated in intellect, keen
Sublimely scale-skinned: smooth & streamlined
Proud, proper python: polished, pristine
.
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Snake / Serpent
Size 821 x 599px
File Size 344 kB
Thanks! I owe most of the design to nature (the real species of python known as the amethystine python) and to naga conventions.. and to Nae, for refining Ame's look here and there, now and then. :}===<
Also, thanks for the fave, but I would have thought you'd have faved it on WM's account! O:
Also, thanks for the fave, but I would have thought you'd have faved it on WM's account! O:
WM = WhiteMantis. On her account. I have it linked up there, but here it is again: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/15506386/
Umm.. go ahead? >_> Just, like.. no touching. Don't want to get messy DOG germs and fur all over this majesty over here.
(am I doing this DOG humour right? Maybe that was too rude) -- Also, thanks for the fave but I would have thought you'd have faved it on WM's account!
(am I doing this DOG humour right? Maybe that was too rude) -- Also, thanks for the fave but I would have thought you'd have faved it on WM's account!
Erudite. Yeah, I can see that. I've always felt you're particularly good at expressing your enjoyment of a bit of artwork. Of the handful of people who most often comment on my own work, your comments tend to stand out. So, hey, on behalf of everyone who's been graced by your comments, thank you, sir. Much obliged. Makes me feel kinda guilty that I'm so bad at leaving comments on other peoples' work. =P
Thanks very much! I'm glad you liked it. :}
Your lines are alright, but they didn't quite fit with the directive nature of the previous ones. I mean, the others were saying what a snake should do, but your 'listen please' one is asking others to listen to the snake, I think.
Also, the originals had a rhyme scheme, were mostly alliterative, and the first letter in each line spelled out a word. So.. it would have been hard to fit something new in there, anyway.
Your lines are alright, but they didn't quite fit with the directive nature of the previous ones. I mean, the others were saying what a snake should do, but your 'listen please' one is asking others to listen to the snake, I think.
Also, the originals had a rhyme scheme, were mostly alliterative, and the first letter in each line spelled out a word. So.. it would have been hard to fit something new in there, anyway.
Bugger...I suppose this is one of the many woes of collaboration and/or third-party succession. It's just that I have a passion for the emphasis on animality (e.g. instincts, habits, etc.) when it comes to portraying humanoid animals (see Plus Chienne Que Femme for an example). And, in the case of lizards and/or snakes, the common "Sssssnaketalk" trope is a must for me.
The rhythm of the poem is beautiful.
A lot of the poems that come before this are definitely more verbose, but this one has a simple elegance to it that just can't be ignored. The transition of rhyme to alliteration is so charming; the increasing and decreasing syllable count; and even the use of ampersands to emphasize the structure of the words. It's wonderful.
My only problem is (my own fault as I've got an affection to rocks and minerals) is that serpentine is a homonym that comes to me first as a word that (in my head) initially rhymes with 'wean' as opposed to its intention as 'whine' to be followed up with 'fine' and 'line(s)'. [Though there is controversy in how the mineral is properly pronounced anyway]
I really should be conditioned properly as you're always about snakes. I need snakes on the brain.
A lot of the poems that come before this are definitely more verbose, but this one has a simple elegance to it that just can't be ignored. The transition of rhyme to alliteration is so charming; the increasing and decreasing syllable count; and even the use of ampersands to emphasize the structure of the words. It's wonderful.
My only problem is (my own fault as I've got an affection to rocks and minerals) is that serpentine is a homonym that comes to me first as a word that (in my head) initially rhymes with 'wean' as opposed to its intention as 'whine' to be followed up with 'fine' and 'line(s)'. [Though there is controversy in how the mineral is properly pronounced anyway]
I really should be conditioned properly as you're always about snakes. I need snakes on the brain.
Firstly, thanks for the fave!
Secondly, I'm older than 19, so I'm no longer a 'serpenteen', I'm a serpenTINE! Hahaha :}===<
But really, as far as I can see, both are acceptable pronunciations. Or rather, the 'teen' one is for the verb, the action, the movement of serpentining, and the other, the 'tine' one, is for the adjective, I thought. Also, I suppose I was taking the adjective to make a noun, as if the name for this style of naga was actually 'a serpentine' (whereas 'Naga' would be someone with a very human upper body, human skin, human head, etc)
You need snakes on the brain? I think I could probably make that happen.
Thank you for your kind words about that poem, too!
Did you see that it's also an Acrostic poem? :>
Secondly, I'm older than 19, so I'm no longer a 'serpenteen', I'm a serpenTINE! Hahaha :}===<
But really, as far as I can see, both are acceptable pronunciations. Or rather, the 'teen' one is for the verb, the action, the movement of serpentining, and the other, the 'tine' one, is for the adjective, I thought. Also, I suppose I was taking the adjective to make a noun, as if the name for this style of naga was actually 'a serpentine' (whereas 'Naga' would be someone with a very human upper body, human skin, human head, etc)
You need snakes on the brain? I think I could probably make that happen.
Thank you for your kind words about that poem, too!
Did you see that it's also an Acrostic poem? :>
I like puns, but there's a limit of how far one an stretch the joke before it snaps violently and makes everyone involved look a bit too silly. :}
I can't manage to spell myself into a finding the Acrostic identity. It's not an anagram, is it? I'm sure it's simple and I'm just failing to find the deeper meaning of 'crisp'!
I can't manage to spell myself into a finding the Acrostic identity. It's not an anagram, is it? I'm sure it's simple and I'm just failing to find the deeper meaning of 'crisp'!
Oh, nope, Acrostics don't have to have a name, it can just be a word. My point was that snakes should be crisp, although I realize it's a strange, secondary definition of the word. I was thinking of crispness of presentation, insofar to mean that crispness of manner or design would be near to neatness, sleekness and smoothness.
I may have been equating 'crisp' to be like a crisp winter's day, ie: "(of the weather) cool, fresh, and invigorating"
I may have been equating 'crisp' to be like a crisp winter's day, ie: "(of the weather) cool, fresh, and invigorating"
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