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Here is a look at a very early version of the game's opening. The lady Niy has recently saved your life, and readily expresses her intention to do it all over again if she needs to. So thank her!... Seriously, The Price of Life is quite high... Even for a priestess of the Twilight like Niy.
All of this is subject to change, but it's a nice look into the aim of Twilight Hope, a game I am currently developing. Fav, and feel free to comment if you'd like to see more of this ^^
Story elements as well as project design are ©
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All of this is subject to change, but it's a nice look into the aim of Twilight Hope, a game I am currently developing. Fav, and feel free to comment if you'd like to see more of this ^^
Story elements as well as project design are ©
Kaldravv KaldravvAnd the artwork displayed is ©
Kalid909 Kalid909All related design and intellectual property related to Twilight Hope are not for use by any other user or group of any kind without clear and direct publicly stated permission granted by and from this account.
Category All / All
Species Rat
Size 640 x 400px
File Size 257.8 kB
Oh no, not at all. Once I get playable sections of the game finished, me and some people I've selected to help me test and correct the game are going to play through each part, write down mistakes like that on a notepad, and I'm going to then correct them. Spelling, odd lighting, the white speckling around Niy's bust shot. This is still incredibly early. I just wanted to show people who are following this project what kind of game this is going to be.
Graphics:
Awesome!
Design:
Awesome!
Grammar-Nazi Alphonse Hatler says:
"I'll do whatever I can to see to it you are alive and well"
"you are" or "you're" - "your" is "totali wronk" here - unless it's meant as a wordplay which I am not seeing.
:)
But aside of the typo: It's all very lovely and looks stunning!
Awesome!
Design:
Awesome!
Grammar-Nazi Alphonse Hatler says:
"I'll do whatever I can to see to it you are alive and well"
"you are" or "you're" - "your" is "totali wronk" here - unless it's meant as a wordplay which I am not seeing.
:)
But aside of the typo: It's all very lovely and looks stunning!
Thank you very much! As a mentioned to a the person above, and in the artists comments, this is still quite early, and issues such as that will be ironed out.
However, though I appreciate both your praise and the critique of the dialog, as both are very important to me, I do not appreciate the mocking.
However, though I appreciate both your praise and the critique of the dialog, as both are very important to me, I do not appreciate the mocking.
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