I have 2 critiques:
-Panel 2 confused me a bit as in first panel he seems to be facing Flame but suddenly in next panel he flips off to his right? I assume he turned then? I just got a little confused about the staging ^^;
-The bricks changes size from panel 3 and 4, you're probably already aware since you spend so much time on them (Sorry you died D: Here, revive with THIS: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zs7Ud1h9ryA >:D) I do really like how you drew them in the last panel though, they're simple and though they are many they don't steal away the attention from the mean lookin' dude! I wonder if he is going to interact with them ouo Or if he's just going to stay there to remain mysterios and creepy =u= That's also plenty threatening as well XD
I really like that mean lookin' dude though, he looks handsome!... But probably he is a bad guy hanging around there S:I
Shifting style but still remaining the spooky, mysterious atmosphere, and also getting more background scenery showing~ Marvelous >8{D


Fffff, Flame! Hurry! I wanna see where you're going!! OuO

Thanks for the critique! I appreciate it!
- Yes, I see why it might be confusing. We're seeing him from behind, and I just kinda failed at making him flip the bird in the right direction. He's actually supposed to be standing the same way XD
- Yeah, I got tired of the bricks XD (also that epic song!!! >8D)

Thanks! Glad you like the page! And the guy! I think he's aware he's kind of a looker B3

Yeah! >8D

Thank you! I'm glad you like it!

I can't tell you. That would be a major SPOILER >B3