EDIT: Hey, so after some consideration for the flow of the story (thanks to feedback by my fox) I'm making this Chapter 2. I'll post Chapter 1 right now and then Chapter 3.
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 21.5 kB
To start out with a mysterious scenario specific to the, I guess, main character peaked my interest. What was also good was that the main character's friends already having some history allowing for some good character development through back stories. Overall, I am interested to see what is going to become of this group of, what I can tell, martial artists and more specifically Chris Hayabusa. Not sure of what sort of response you wanted so I gave a tact one.
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