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Jason and his cute self >w<
I'm still working on shading and such.
I even tryed a background X3
I know its not that good.
But Hey!
I tryed haha.
You can critique This one too.
Not the background, but Jason.
How did I do?
How can I improve?
Art and Jason:
JasonBrambleTail
I'm still working on shading and such.
I even tryed a background X3
I know its not that good.
But Hey!
I tryed haha.
You can critique This one too.
Not the background, but Jason.
How did I do?
How can I improve?
Art and Jason:
JasonBrambleTail
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Skunk
Size 1280 x 1280px
File Size 221.4 kB
This looks adorable, nice job.
As for critique, anatomy needs work. Neck is too big compared to the head and especially the torso. Torso overall is too small unless you are going for a kid like build, but even then it's too slim. Chest needs to be significantly wider, helps to compare with an image of yourself from a mirror, see how wide ur chest is compared to ur arm. Body is proportion, if you can get a sense of that it will help alot like chest is 3 arm girths across, waist is 3, thighs are 2 forearm girths, and so on. The head is really good, only big issue comes with the hair, the hair goes around the head, it doesn't stick to the sides unless they are supposed to be facial contour bangs. Practice drawing hair for girls, use reference pics of celebrities with decently long hair to get a grasp of how hair looks.
Hope this helps and doesn't come off as too critical
As for critique, anatomy needs work. Neck is too big compared to the head and especially the torso. Torso overall is too small unless you are going for a kid like build, but even then it's too slim. Chest needs to be significantly wider, helps to compare with an image of yourself from a mirror, see how wide ur chest is compared to ur arm. Body is proportion, if you can get a sense of that it will help alot like chest is 3 arm girths across, waist is 3, thighs are 2 forearm girths, and so on. The head is really good, only big issue comes with the hair, the hair goes around the head, it doesn't stick to the sides unless they are supposed to be facial contour bangs. Practice drawing hair for girls, use reference pics of celebrities with decently long hair to get a grasp of how hair looks.
Hope this helps and doesn't come off as too critical
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