Now that is quite a surprise...I'm very flattered you bothered with any of my silly affairs. I've been looking at your page periodically to see if your recent taste for art had yet to yield anything, but I certainly wouldn't have expected this.

I think the head's size is perfectly fine. It looks proportional to a character as thin as Ely. I'd say the spots are pretty good considering I've never fully defined their location, even to myself. The only thing there is that his spots are a dark grey as opposed to brown, but the locations look pretty good, especially on the face. I've never drawn him as himself more than once, and since you mostly had the story to go off of I'd say it's a pretty good shot at it.

I'm incredibly appreciative that you made him your first subject of the new art supplies, thanks a ton for this. You're an absolute dear.

Well, this makes for an intriguing spin on the "skate rat" archetype! Nice attention to detail with the anatomy too!