You just got Rick Rolled

Yeah. I always thought of Cory as being a very smooth criminal. I do have a short scene with him in the second episode. I guess that is why I can hear John Delancy (Q) as Cory. He has that voice that can be smooth and easy going but also add that bit of evil that can make your skin crawl a little. Anyways. good work. I love the Dragon logo/dragon behind Evil.

Oh, just so you know, Tanzen. The early pictures of Cory with two eyes is fine, but Laura cut one of his eyes out, so any more "recent" drawings of Cory should have him with one eye (the left one if you were wondering.) alright, figured I should mention that.

Oh crap. Forgot about that. Thanks.

you are welcome.

If it makes you feel better, I had forgotten about it, too, until I was running through the second script where I have a scene with Cory. and Laura mentions the fact that she removed one of his eyes.

I can and will fix it in the second panel as it's supposed to be sort of current.

okay. Thanks, Tanzen.

I seems interesting so far. I hope to see more soon.

Thanks. Though, Tanzen does most of the work.

I hope to see more too.

And I am gradually working on a re-write of the "first episode" that will appear in typed form as "Cityscape Precursor 2: The Beginning." I am working on and writing everything from the before the war and working through a point that is actually halfway through the second episode. I have a better line to end the episode with.


"Laura, if you save this city, then you can consider your debt paid."