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Hello everyone. Time to officially solidify the winner of that competition. I have the envelope right here.
And the winner of the 2nd Annual Best Horror Story 2014 is…
……… Who the Heck is Freddy!?!
Well, the votes are in and the points are tied at zero. Both competitors like the other's story. This means that we will have to find a tie breaker. And after kidnappi- I mean, Finding a volunteer in Rusty's real life brother… and forcibly (Allowing) him to read both stories. Here are the resulting conclusions…
The Elite
Very original and creative. I felt like this story had a point and surprised me as to its conclusion. Not a bad read as a whole and left just enough details to keep an audience interested.
My Pet Werewolf
There. It's read. If you (Rusty) want feed back, here goes. Your story had three major sections. It was a bit overly complex for a short story. Also, what 10 year old boy talks like that and can't go pee in the woods on their own? I know you didn't. Your story is very original as well. It has character development. The twist I found confusing, but I tend to forget details after 18 pages. Overall still good work. Not my cup of tea. But I'm sure it would still have a larger fanbase at a convention.
Conclusion: I say your pen-pal (Tricky) won, but only because he kept to a simple plot with a pretty interesting twist, even though I'm not into the Sci-Fi space alien genre personally.
Dun dun da duunnn! TrickyChimera Received the Scary Harry Award!
Yeah, I know this picture can be a bit ego boosting, but I seriously didn't think that I would win. Even though I won, the other competitors (Aka just
) was nice enough to make this… bold looking trophy for the winner.
So, I'd like to say that did a great job with his story [html=http://www.furaffinity.net/view/14665956] My Pet Werewolf [/html] even if it was a bit complicated, even for me to follow… I get what he was going for and I really love the ending. It just needs a few… more tweaks to flow better.
And the winner of the 2nd Annual Best Horror Story 2014 is…
……… Who the Heck is Freddy!?!
Well, the votes are in and the points are tied at zero. Both competitors like the other's story. This means that we will have to find a tie breaker. And after kidnappi- I mean, Finding a volunteer in Rusty's real life brother… and forcibly (Allowing) him to read both stories. Here are the resulting conclusions…
The Elite
Very original and creative. I felt like this story had a point and surprised me as to its conclusion. Not a bad read as a whole and left just enough details to keep an audience interested.
My Pet Werewolf
There. It's read. If you (Rusty) want feed back, here goes. Your story had three major sections. It was a bit overly complex for a short story. Also, what 10 year old boy talks like that and can't go pee in the woods on their own? I know you didn't. Your story is very original as well. It has character development. The twist I found confusing, but I tend to forget details after 18 pages. Overall still good work. Not my cup of tea. But I'm sure it would still have a larger fanbase at a convention.
Conclusion: I say your pen-pal (Tricky) won, but only because he kept to a simple plot with a pretty interesting twist, even though I'm not into the Sci-Fi space alien genre personally.
Dun dun da duunnn! TrickyChimera Received the Scary Harry Award!
Yeah, I know this picture can be a bit ego boosting, but I seriously didn't think that I would win. Even though I won, the other competitors (Aka just
) was nice enough to make this… bold looking trophy for the winner. So, I'd like to say that did a great job with his story [html=http://www.furaffinity.net/view/14665956] My Pet Werewolf [/html] even if it was a bit complicated, even for me to follow… I get what he was going for and I really love the ending. It just needs a few… more tweaks to flow better.
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