Let's start with the bad stuff here. Alot of it was cut off due to my small and piece of crap scanner. As for the creature itself, yes, there are several anatomy flaws. For example, the front legs are a tad too short and the tail seems a little strange, I couldn't get it to curve right. And as for the inking, I did mess up a few times, my hand kept sticking to the paper...which was very annoying. Other than that, I guess it's not too bad.

Despute the flaws I like this one's design. Right now, the mane and spikes look a little sketchy. Once it's colored it'll make a little more sense as to where everything is. I like how his markings on his body came out. I also enjoyed making the feathers that are protruding from beneath the tuff of fur on his tail. They do, infact, attach directly to the tail itself. I got the idea from a Pheonix's tail feathers. And yes, those are feathers attached to his whiskers.

Please ignore the heavy flaws but I don't mind any helpful critique! If you're rude then you will just be ignored ^^. Oh and working on a full profile for him as well. Hopefully will get that done soon too.


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