well i donno if i got this better but i like it
Category Music / Trance
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 109px
File Size 2.29 MB
Critique: It's a good song, though from my speakers (could be the problem, since its laptop speakers) I found a few possible ways to enhance it.
at 0:09, rolling basebeat, perhaps?
And as a side note, personally, the notes of the song are well made, however it feels to me as if they don't have the...*tries to think of a word* Oomph, to them..a resonance, perhaps...they feel that they're there, but they aren't as solid as they could be.
Hope this helps, and yes, the song is enjoyable nonetheless :)
at 0:09, rolling basebeat, perhaps?
And as a side note, personally, the notes of the song are well made, however it feels to me as if they don't have the...*tries to think of a word* Oomph, to them..a resonance, perhaps...they feel that they're there, but they aren't as solid as they could be.
Hope this helps, and yes, the song is enjoyable nonetheless :)
xD, i figured out how to write better (legibally) you just focus really... MY BRAIN HURTS... hard on the... HEADACHES SUCK... area (a sphere shaped thing) where the pencil is writing, then you press a little harder... THEN YOU GET A HEADACHE... umm... yeah xD... now, on a more philisophical note... ooh i like this song... ha he that CD has a funny purple shiny back color on it (:D)E< (its a big-headed stick figure :D)
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