HI~ i've taken many classes on painting. How harsh/in depth of a critique would you like? :3

Im also gunna search up some lighting tutorial and books that helped me a bunch. once i do i'll go more in depth.

Something that stands out to me is that the lighting is not uniform to source. What helps me is to think about things as simple 3d shapes. (the muzzle as a rectangular prism and so on.) Don't be afraid to reference photos or other paintings.

If you wana add me on skype i can give ya some more pointers~

I really don't mind how harsh, I really don't have a limit :P

And really? O: What is your Skype?

scrumpet360[at]gmail.com :3

except without the [at] >< look on my page it says the actual one

One of the things that I've felt that has bottlenecked me the most is relying on lineart.
Try practising how to colour/define things without recurring to lineart, that way you're also practising values, which is one of the main things (imo) that make art really stand out.

Thanks~ :D
And does it really look like lineart? It's a sketch o.o I dun know, I tried. x3
But thanks a bunch for the tips!

Well, lineart/outline :V

But yeah, it's better if you learn how to define an object with just shades/lights.
I've heard that starting in grey-scale works best.

Wow this looks realy awesomen